well...the story is interesting but why does inu have to be such a prick to kagome just cuz she's not kikyo...in my opinion, kagome is SO much better than kik-i'm babbling SORRY!!anyway write more please!!

Update soon.^_^

I loved it! You are very talented. I like how Kagome is acting, hell, I like how everyone is acting. Sess/Kag would be nice, but so would Inu/Kag, just pick the one you like best for this plot.

Also, thanks so much for reviewing. If you have AIMS add YoukaiRyo or Yahoo add mika-chan_13 and then we can talk ^-^

Please update soon!!

Hey, I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what you intend to do with the phoneix herb. Surly you have something planned for that. As for the pairings, I still like that you're keeping us guessing. I like either pairing.

I'm going to give you an itty bitty grammer lesson just cause my college professor drilled this in to me. (I'm not claiming to be the queen of grammer here).

expect means "excluding". As in ... She plans to buy every shoe in the store - except the ugly ones.

accept means "to receive a gift." As in I accept this award my fellow actors.

They sound very simlar and I used to mix them up all the time. That's why my college professor used to yell at me.

I love your story and I can't wait until you have the time to update again.

is inuyasha the one with the canine ears?lol please tell me what inuyasha is before i get dizzy trying to understand .

Oh wow! I love it so far! Keep it up!! Oh uh, pairing... I'd say Sess/Kag.

err... too many new japanese terms to keep up with... among today's glossary, i already knew arigato, domo arigato (gozaimasu), hime, iie, oniichan, and shimatta. *sigh* there's only so much you can learn while watching anime with subs...

kinda wish you didn't cut it in half, i'd like to know what happens afterwards... but really, didn't think inuyasha would be THAT rude in front of other royalties, but then again, i suppose we can simply say that its in his nature for this fic, right?

well, i liked where this is going so far, and i wish for you to post the next chapter as soon as possible. maybe within a week? ^_~ oh, and i would love this fic to be a sess/kag pairing if possible. in anime and manga, inu/kag is fine, but i found that i prefer a sess/kag pairing in fics, since you can't ever see that in the originals... so take that into consideration while writing the fic, alright? =D

this is greatand i think dis should be an inu/kag fic!

Great story so far! Keep on writing.

(P.S. I personally think you should leave ir to the original pairings like Inu/Kag and San/Mir.
But tht's just my opinion.

Hi, your story has a promising begining and I can't wait to read more. I love how you have intentionally kept the pairing vauge. It just makes me want to read it even more. Oh Kouga needs to beat the ball somehow. He always manages to make of mess of Keg's life (like she needs any more mess after her parents' are messing up her life.)

Cool,
the use of traditional japonese customs paired with the oddities of an offbeat anime in the mindset of modern youth make 4 an amusing and uniquie story:)
some minor issues: the people talkiing seem to have read the script before hand and talked with some minute unclarity that was rectified after some closer scrutiny. let726

SESS/KAG!^_^