This was just... wow.

I don't know how to explain it.

But. Wow.

i love it
its to funny not to love it
though i am a little confused on a few parts

omg this is so cool! you have brought in all the steriotypical Gohan torture idea's, and shown why they are so illogical! that is so unique! well done!

love Helena a.k.a. Thealmightyspork

*grins* I can honestly say that I love it, even though I have committed just about every sin listed herein. Though, the Pina Colada and drunk Dende weren't cliches back in the day (oh, my poor old bones) and I'm rather proud to think that I may have had some part in giving rise to a cliche in a tiny corner of DBZ fandom *grins*

I will be reading on if you choose to continue this--I don't see why you wouldn't. Haven't been back here since the NC17 ban, give or take, so I'm surprised to see how many Gohan torture fics there are out there now! Poor kid. I like your alternative ideas for field trips, maybe someone will pick up on them. Field Trip to Capsule Corps is of course a classic, but DemonDancing did it first, and I don't believe I've seen anyone do it better, so I don't bother my eyes with reading them. Anyway, gotta love parody =) thanks for the fic!

But you gotta IGNORE the plot holes. Otherwise...Sorry. Don't know where I was going with that. My sense of humor is whacked. Any...My comp so sucks. It just deleted everything I just wrote. Awe heck, I'll cuss it out later. Lesse. Where was I? O yes. Anyway I'm not actually gonna flame you. ^^ That was very fun, and delightfully insane...and mysterious. (Sorry couldn't resist.) But you are right about reading ShaggyDiz's fic first. The pina colada makes so much more sense then. It makes the hole thing almost logical...Wow. *shudder*

huh?

this is an ok story

That was so much fun. I've been enjoying the Gohan torture fics lately even if they are all EXACTLY the same. However, every now wnd then, during a full moon on Vegeta-sei, someone comes up with a new idea. However you forgot to mention one little detail, something that really needs to be harped on. NONE of the torture fics are EVER finished! They sit there half completed for years because most authors can't come up with a new idea to save thier lives.

I won't flame you! This fic's bloody hilarious!

While I had fully intended to give a detailed and perhaps thoughtful review, or perhaps a somewhat witty comment regarding the contents, I believe that in this case I am best served by the following, which is quite out of character for me but nevertheless is the optimal expression of my current opinion.
>_<
As for that massive and inaccurate sentence... eat your heart out, William Cullen Bryant.

That was funny. I think that all of what you put in was logical. I totally agree on the self insertions thing.

surprizingly that made seense but where's the gohan torture?

Technically Cell does have a soul.
Think of it an example would be a test-tube baby

... Okay...

I'm too lazy to sign in... (who isn't?), but I think I've reviewed before anyways, so...

If I haven't reviewed this:

... ... ... *struggles not to crack up* ... mff... m... HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! *gasp* that is so funny!


If I have, I am just coming back cuz I have a question:

How did you get that pic onto your profile? Please tell!