HOT!!
In dire need of a cold shower.

nice.

Wow! That was intense. I love the way you described evrything Sam felt. Please continue to write. I look forward to reading lots more from you.

WOW!! What an amazing story in every way. It was so well written - I could picture the scene very clearly. Beautiful imagery and storyline.

testing...

Wow, MC...wow. This is touching, beautifully written, wonderfully painted with gorgeous imagery, detail and description. The dialogue tugs at the heart, and your characterizations are as always amazingly real. I'm so in awe of this piece right now, I simply cannot find any more words to describe how much I love it. Well, maybe two. Keep writing!

M...as usual, so beautifully descriptive and wonderfully angsty. I don't know what else to say - it's magnificent, just like everything else you've written.