awesome!

Wow...even after all these years, you are still my favorite DBZ fiction writer.

Hello there again! Last chapter you have posted for this story... I'm pretty disappointed that it'll have to end. I mean, seriously, nearly 100 reviews for FOUR CHAPTERS?! That's like... 25 reviews a chapter- practically undheard of!

But since it's been four years since you've updated, I certainly won't be holding my breath. Onward!

I added you story Story Alert anyway...just in case. I mean, you never know.

I kind of feel sorry for Pan. Personally, I've never had to tell anybody I was pregnant (well, for a few good reasons), but I can imagine that it would be really awkward to have to tell someone... especially if you had no way of guessing how they would react.

The reaction of her family was great. I'm only wondering about one thing- and that's Goten and Marron. Are they unable to have kids? Hmm...

Good work, update if you ever get the chance, but if you don't, I'll understand. :)

Cheers,
Ciao,
-Manna

Are those two words, "You're pregnant"? I thought it might be what was wrong with her in the last chapter, but I was unsure, so I didn't say anything.

You write so well- too bad there's only one more chapter to go. I love how you can write about two related- but completely different- couples, in the same story. You have done a fine job so far.

This is really good, you know. I love your writing style. Your grammar is, for the most part, very good. Too bad this hasn't been updated or anything for...well, a long, long time.

I especially liked Gohan's concern. I don't know if they ever really went into detail concerning how long Saiyan's live. Vegeta says that they stay in "The prime of their life" longer, to still be able to fight, but that could simply mean that they live 100 years, but look 25-30 years old for, well, maybe 30 years, instead of just a few. If that makes any sense.

The whole thing is rather depressing if you ask me.

You know, one time, as a joke, I did a fanfiction for the Rurouni Kenshin section about the character's dreams. In one character's dream, he dreams that everyone is old. I never thought I'd see a fic that was so good at describing older characters.

It's pretty depressing!

I love Bulma and Yamcha's conversation. Yamcha has never been a favorite character of mine, but I still like him. The way you wrote him and how he still feels for Bulma- even though he's so much older now- is fantastic.

I'm impressed.

The whole baseball scene was really great! I don't have much experience with baseball, but I could still follow the story without being confused, which is great! (It means you're writing it well.)

I wonder what's going on with Pan. Hmm... Makes me so curious. =3

This was a really good start! An interesting idea, if I do say so myself.

Most marriages fall apart because of money trouble, so that was a good reason for Gohan and Videl's fighting.

I'm pretty braindead since it's nearly 1:30am, or I'd have more to say, I'm sure.

Waiting was okay in itself, you didn't have to write a prequel or a sequel and ruin it. Don't fix anything that's not broken.

Please update your stories. Or at least make some kind of announcement if you don't plan to continue on with them. I can't stand not knowing whether or not they are going to be finished.
Your writing is amazing. You have such an amazing raw talent. It's so difficult to find stories on this site (in any category) with the style and the flow that your stories have. To be able to find such a worthy piece of writing on this site is incredible. The last thing the fanfiction world needs is another author throwing in the towel.

Wah! Update already!! I miss your stories :( I want to see whether Trunks and Pan have a baby girl or boy. I know its been like three years but please don't give up on this story. It'll make all the readers upset.. like me!! Don't be like those authors on Fanfiction and Fictionpress, that create a story but never finish. However, if you don't want to finish please at least say something simplifying your reason not to. Please update. Pretty please!!

cute cute chapter!

I have to say that this is the best fic ever written! U R a great writer! But is 2005 almost 2006 and u havent updated!! PlZ PLZ pretty PLZ!! UPDATE!! we love u why dont u!!

aw...lolz congrats for them...n poor goten and marron...i feel soo bad for them..also bout videl wOw her n da oter women xcludin bra n pan r gettin old n r gona die...too bad no dragonballs huh...? lolz...anywyz im sO sorry bout what happened to u...im glad u okie...u noe...just b glad u lived u noe remember that and nutin else..and u.ll be fine even if stil a lil u noe...edgy bout it...I HOPE U OKIE NOW BTW WHERE R U!? lolz

this is a great story, update it soon. lol.

*begins fangurling*
Oh, come on! It's been over a year! Please please please update soon!
*ends fangurling*

Look what you made me resort to. Anyway, please update soon. I love this story. It is the only DBZ story I read anymore. The way you have written the characters personalities is excellent. It's the closest to canon I've ever seen. For the love of God, write chapter five.

Regards, Leuco

DA! Write more!