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Reviews For: The End
InsaneJediGirl 2005-06-22 . chapter 1
Sad yet funny towards the end.Enjoyed it,wasnt expecting the end in the least,threw me off! lol
Mara look-a-like 2004-05-31 . chapter 1
Mildly confusing but it was good i have a couple of questions for you... 1) ok was it a dream or a vision or a vision of what might happen?
2) y was Luke in the Hospitol?Now i have a comment I love the fact you incorperated Obi-Wan & Anakin int eh end was so awsome! I love the fact that now Anakin can teach Obi-Wan. I also love the love anakin has for Luke & Mara & the fact that he is genualy happy for them & wants them to be happy. I would greatly appreciate it if you could e-mail me with the answers to my questions as soon as possible. My e-mailis anglgrl107@msn.com & in teh subject spot i would appericiate it if you could type Star Wars fan Fic thanks.
Tora Hikari 2004-03-20 . chapter 1
**Glances over piece.** Interesting... very interesting... I would guess alternate universe here, but not always a bad thing that is... I will raise one complaint as a loyal Star Wars fan... Obi-wan is one with the force by this time, and therefore unable to have a conciousness outside of it... just lettign you know.
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