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Just started. Will keep on reading. Really, discribing a game is more funny if it is out of text. Also, is Super Smash Brothers series one of your favorite games? Good work.

Marina's mom sounds like she had her brain sucked out with a vaccum cleaner.

ZOMG THIS PWNS. X3

Yay! Pokemon goodness! Kecleon is funny, but Absol is my 2nd favorite next to Pichu which is the de-evolved form of Pikachu and I'm really hyper right now can't you see hahahahahahahaah this is all a long sentence intresting isn't it?

Crud, it ended.

Anyway, this is stil t3h win, so yah, keep it up!

heh, good chapter. i totally SUX at rock, paper scissors cuz i have extremely bad luck. I LOSE! update soon!

It took me forever for the thing to tell me you had updated *shrug*

End of everyday low prices me: lol

It was a bit shorter then your usual chapters but I can live with that. Everytime Marina says something that makes me lol, her sarcasm about letting Magma go was funny...

Anyway you raise an interesting arguement. Will she get to the elite four, and will this fic be finished before Diamond and Pearl :P.

100th Review! Woohoo! Anyway, I thought this chapter was shorter than usual, but that's ok, and it was funny too! (You had me at Rock Paper Scissors) Please continue!

LOL Great way to end the year!
Anyway, HAPPY NEW YEAR!
*sets off a rocket and blows up a random building*

Whoa, no offense, but Marina is a total **...

Good so far, I'll r & r, later.

*Sends out Jibacoil, & electrocutes Marina & The Authoress.*

that rocks! I LOVE IT! RANDOMNESS TO THE MAX DUDE! I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITING DAM U! lol i hate vrendan. he can go shove poles up his **!... but he might enjoy it...O.o keep going u rok!

HAHA.
This story is, possibly, the best one ever written.
Hehe...I like Minun the best, I think.
Or maybe Lairon.
Or Tropius.
Eh.
I dunno. Now that I think about it, I probably like Marina the best.
Who cares?
Probably not you.
Shutting up now.

Aw for sure i thought you'd make disaster jokes about Absol, especially considering they completely changed Absol's role in mystery dungeon, it fights disasters instead of causing them? Right... and I never saw a disaster, and it sure doesn't live in the mountains :P.

Anyway, funny jokes about the gym... and Steven, and returning to Zigzagoon pick up jokes... I found toilet paper lol... what I want to know is how did it GET down there?

Also Marina didnt have Winona's badge... so she couldn't fly... but how dumb is that anyway... :P

Spanish homework, lol. Get a Ludicolo, those things know Spanish as much as they can dance!...Or maybe it's because they look like deformed Mexicans.

Anyway, lol'in chapter, especially Aron who seems to be like Marina in every single way.

Kecleon and Absol, heh. Absol would own if it weren't for it's sadly pitiful stats and stupid D/P nature. Stupid Nintendo, Absol is the greatest. >:(

absol's r totally awesome! ...and taht is a good question about the flyer thing...*thinking* AH! im thinking and im not in school,its the apocalypse! RUN 4 UR LIFE! ok...update soon!