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The Name 2004-11-05 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT!! ITS SO SWEET!BEAUTIFUL!!YAY!!CONTINUE!

Alrighty then you be understandin where me be comin from?GOOD..THats Good I'll see yall in heavan much love from us kiddies and grannies at . MWA!luv is such a wonderful thing its grt ya gotta be lovin love because...MY BOLOGNA HAS A FIRST NAME ITS OSCAR MY BOLOGNA HAS A SENCOND NAME ITS MAYER..I LOVE TO EAT IT EVERYDAY AND IF YOU ASK ME WHY I'LL SAY...BECAUSE OSCAR MAYER HAS A WAY WITH BOLOGNA!

U know you smell...ur such a nerdasuorus and I can't spell are yall gunna be reportin me for it huh?Ya know it took me 5 frickin years to write me frickin story and yall be reporting me the second day it be posted!!Damn you smell like my grandma's **.And your stories ar lil ** and they should join the "I'm gay lil ** group" but..wait I think already have one that allience **. Yea yea i be knowin wut yall talkin i wanting to join it so i can be gay!!we

Mark:Ya you smell
Lily:Like my grandma's **
Scott:OMG we r writin in skript REPORT US ALLIENCE!!AH REPORT!AH!

THE END...
ffwarrioress 2004-09-01 . chapter 17
Aww how sweet! That was a great story, it managed to be sappy and real funny too. :)
NicePersonWhoSendsReveiws 2004-08-19 . chapter 17
o,O;...umm...I'M VERY CONFUSED! WAH...GREAT STORy, YA? :) Later!
-NicePersonWhoSendsReveiws
Fire rain 2004-08-02 . chapter 1
This story is very interesting. It seems to be the ONLY story in the Allience! I'm here to congratulate you on your work! I would like to join your crew to get rid of the garbage other aurthors have made. You are a true writer. I'm am very impressed by your work! And please make your stories, don't let anyone try to get rid of your story! And for those idiot aurthors, don't even try to think of getting rid of this story! Unlike yours, this is a work of art, a MASTER PIECE! While yours are filthy garbage which has raded FF.net. So don't complain... learn from BDX. Let your life be long BDX and for those idiots, Cheers.
Bloody Vixen 2004-08-02 . chapter 17
A joyful read. But the humour's kind of dry. And there is much-much more room for improvement. Like on chapter one, it seemed like all of them just met up, just like that. Some elaboration would be great. Like when Mickey and Riku fought the Heartless, how do they feel about it? Aside from Riku's apparent hatred for Pixie Dust, what does he think about Sora? This is humour, yes, so it would be quite funny if Riku had some witty comment to add about Sora and...pixie dust. XD

And I see that you've typed some words like tHiS? Parody? Maybe? Intentional? And poor Zidane...what's with all those questions? ;-)

Can't wait for the next chapter of Best of the West. Thank you for reviewing my fics as well. Hope to read more soon...he, he...
Cleopatra Antoinette 2004-07-20 . chapter 12
Hee hee. I like this chapter. It's funny. By the way, I made a new story, and I was wondering if you could give me your opinion on it. It's called Six Dragons,Two Souls. It's another Sonic fic.
Paixe 2003-09-20 . chapter 3
I really like this story! Haven't read it all yet, but it's on my to-do list. It's nice seeing some real talent in fics, especially in my beloved Kingdom Hearts craze.
dancingdiva 2003-07-03 . chapter 18
Ok, now that we can ask questions-
Was Lisa supposed to be you, or just an O.C. that you made up?

Well, I'll think of more questions later, so for now, TOODLES!

~dd~
Heartless-trinity 2003-07-01 . chapter 11
Ahh!! I knew it!! That's so mean!! Poor Riku, who's seeing things. I don't see why she couldn't have let the friends remember her, and just pretend to go away so he didn't look so crazy.. I'm glad you continued, this is no place for an ending.

Heartless-trinity
Heartless-trinity 2003-06-30 . chapter 7
Ok, why can no one else see Lisa? Oh, is Riku imagining her? That's too mean!

HT
dancingdiva 2003-06-26 . chapter 17
This was a GREAT story! I LOVED it!
SkyeCateren 2003-06-20 . chapter 17
O.O You put in Zidane! I forgot my request before... Yanno... That fic was kinda wierd... Oh well SO IS MINE! Anyway I don't want it to end.-_- You had Ansem be Riku's fahers friend? lISA LIVES DOWN THE STREET? Sora doesn't remember? Sora shoulda remembered... Crowned Hearts it the next day! BREAK A LEG RIKU! Can I jump into yer story and... Ask Sora to Crowned Hearts before Kairi does?!?!?!?! PLEASE?!?!?! Hehehehe well anyway. Great fiction! I read more of you later. Kittie Sora looks like hes gonna kill himself over there if I don't help him out with my story... Aw. I might just watch him pout for a while. Well... GOOD FIC! See ya later!
? 2003-06-19 . chapter 1
I hiss at you from sheer hate! Hiis!
dancingdiva 2003-06-08 . chapter 16
Please update soon! I can't wait!

~dd~
dancingdiva 2003-06-08 . chapter 15
YAY! I love this story! Keep up the good work!

~dd~
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