I kno me again but I just thought of somthing on the secound page,at the top.it talk's about Leonards inability to convey about political situations I am almost absolutely sure that that is the way it is supposed to be I mean in most books it puts of that Leonard does have an inability to convey to those situations*

*In the cases of political stress etc.-of subject but have you read Jingo if not do it!

good I like it I have tried to do what you have accomplished in capturing Prachetts crazed style. I have read many of the books etc.I have however not read a one about rats.I do however find that Leonard da quirm is my absoulote favorite charecter.I am thankful that you have realized that no one can match terry prachett in his own style. I think that you almost perfectly captured the Leonard factor as I call it nice job continue with it if you would not mind

I'm liking it so far. Very curious to see where it's going. Update soon, will ya.
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I think pie is quite remarkable, actually...

I haven't read much Terry Pratchett, but enough to know that you have captured his style with uncanny accuracy. I did read the amazing Maurice and I thoroughly enjoy the rats in that. Darktan is an old friend. Your narrative skills have improved greatly since you wrote A True Hufflepuff. I especially like the life-size painting of people eating supper; I actually missed the allusion the first time I read it. Anyway, keep it up.

Nice fic -- you deserve more complimentary reviews for this than you already have! Love your charcterisation of the Bad Blintz rats.

I was was going to reveiw.(she whines)

It made me happy to see the rats in a fic, since I think they're some of Pterry's best creations. I liked the fic, the first chapter was funny, though I thought that the little scenes within the chapter (sorry, don't have a clue what they're called) were a bit short.

I really like this - it just WORKS. I'm not entirely sure why but it does. And it got me to re-read Maurice just to check facts 9you were right). Anyway, looking forward to more.

I LOVE the idea of the seminar. I'm not sure if I said this in my last review or not but this is nicely in the style of PTerry, making it very enjoyable. I espescially like the idea of Bitesize trying to be excited. A good OC.

I like this. It works. A lot of stories are going on at once, very like PTerry's style. Be careful though, too many stories take a while to link together and it may be difficult to cut it short. But do continue, it will be good to see where it goes.

Harriet

BTW, thanks for the review.

Just a quick recommendation: For readability's sake it might be a good idea to space things out a bit. It feels very dense right now, and that in itself is enough to put me off reading any more, since I should have gone to bed hours ago.

Don't worry though - your rats have me intrigued enough to come back for more... ;)

Z...

Yay! bad blintz!

love maurice and his rats!

nice to see one in ankh morpork. but i wonder why...

more more please!

Ha! I always thought it be interesting to do what you have done here. I even put in a hint about the possibility of something like this happening in my story "Wheels of Fortune", but you beat me to it! Well done.
I think it's a good short story, but you have me a little confused. Is it supposed to end with Vimes moment of clarity? And if so, what is the rest about?
All in all, though, an impressive first. Let's have more!