Reviews for They Can't Take That Away

Reviews For: They Can't Take That Away

adpacaus 2008-06-16 ch 16,	abuseAfter re-reading this story for the umpteenth time, I just realized I never submitted a review. As you can tell, I really like this story. All the anxious moments are paired nicely with some of the humor. Picturing a blind Jed trying to memorize names(!) was wild. And I always appreciate how you humanize Ron without changing his nature. Thanks!
Vassilissa 2004-07-06 ch 16, anon.	abuseThis was just really really really good. The way everyone bore up under it, the plot, Jed's charisma, Abbey's grace and strength, everyone. How CJ was CJ. The writing. Thank you for this.
Deanna Riker 2004-04-16 ch 16,	abuseThis is a brilliant story. The characterisation is spot-on. Well done!
annabel-lee1 2003-07-17 ch 16,	abuseWow. This was truly an exquisite story. You have each character down to a "T," and you bring the Sorkinese perfectly. Made me laugh and cry, sometimes at the same time. Not much to say other than that I'm very impressed.
jess squared 2003-04-20 ch 9,	abuseVery nice.. Very serious piece.. And you do such a great job keeping everyone in character. Good job.
cynical-girl 2003-04-18 ch 7,	abuseWow... that's really good. I especially liked the parts where a) Jed threw up in the vase, and b) when he began to laugh at the story. I thought that really made it more real. So, to not make this as boring as review as the others that you've gotten, I'll tell you what I'd like to see happen: I'm not quite sure what's going on with the whole not-being-able-to-see thing, but I'm not quite sure I like it. It makes for an awesome story, but I really like the president and I would like to see him get better. Also, I'd like the press conference to appen. Show that idiot reporter who's boss. mumbles incoherant swears at fictional characters who screw with the president But I really thing you're doing a fantastic job so far... Keep up the good work!
Perri Smith 2003-04-16 ch 5,	abuseLovely job. You've taken a unique situation, and given it life with wonderful dialogue and characterization -- the Bartlet family is particularly well-drawn. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Singing Wolf 2003-04-10 ch 2,	abuseThis is really wonderful! I like that you change the pov's in each part. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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