Not bad. Filia's thoughts were interesting to read, and her recollections of the past as well as her fears and doubts made for a pleasant reading, though I don't agree with all the content. Still, this story was logically and well written, and overall I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and posting this story on the internet. Good job.

Aw... I've never seen Slayers, but... that's so cute! Hee, Valgaav loves his mommy, doesn't he? Poor little guy... Filia and the others take such good care of him, though! It's so sweet! I love it! Your description was great, as always, and it's just such a cute ficcy! Write more! More! ^_^

One of the most beautiful and influencial pieces I've ever read on Filia. Filia is perhaps my favorite female character in Slayers and this has been a priceless joy to read.

How good you tell the story~:) Even though Filia's thoughts focus mostly on Val, the occasional Xelloss scenes are cute and well done. A cute story indeed!

SUGOI NE!! That was immensely beauteous my dear dear friend! *tackle-glomps* I just about bawled when Filia's heart broke! I don't support Vallia at all, of course you know, but the way you wrote it! WOW-NESH! What really warmed me up was all of the family togetherness later on. Heh, Gaav-sama and Fangy are showing up in me doodle book for sure! XD I'd go on and on, but that would take a while! Hey, all you other people! REVIEW THIS FIC! I know you loved it! What's the harm, ne? Keep writing, Inky-san! XD

Excellent, wonderful and emotional story, kupo! ^_^