That last line...

omglove.

I really like this. It captures the mood of Gatsby's funeral wonderfully. I'm glad to find such good work based off one of my favorite books. Awesome job!

I like it! . . . we read the great gatsby this year, and it struck a pretty powerful chord with me.

That is so sad! I recently read the book for English and I loved it! But the ending really really pissed me off! I get way way too attached to characters in books and when the authors just kill them off it makes me angry. But ya, anyway I think I will probably write my own version of the ending of what would have happened if certain events in the book had not.

Well thank you for providing me with entertainment... it was a ver nice poem, and I hope to see more...