 xxunrealisticxxdreamerxx 2008-10-23 . chapter 1too cute |
 Nefariousandrea 2008-07-14 . chapter 1Absolutely beautiful =] |
 Micuko 2008-04-02 . chapter 1so beautiful ^^ |
 LDNatalie 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Love! |
 Ana-chan86 2007-04-18 . chapter 1That was definitely cute...Thanks for the nice OS! =) |
 6tigercubs 2007-02-11 . chapter 1AW so sweet..i like your one shots...go you... |
 kasmo 2006-12-11 . chapter 1Horoscopes, a unique twist to a fic. Very cute. |
 FanFiker-FanFinal 2006-04-18 . chapter 1I really liked the story, although I felt it short, pity! Well, it was good written and Draco was absolutely "in himself". Good job. |
 fifespice 2005-04-25 . chapter 1oh i liked that |
 noelani_ella 2004-10-19 . chapter 1 I want to give you some constructive critism so please don't eat me.
I've read all your H/D fics and I've loved the plot and the twists. You've got some great material here. One problem: Your characterisation of Malfoy makes me roll my eyes. Someone who has been on his guard for so many years wouldn't be so submissive to Harry just because he suddenly realised that he had sexual feelings towards the Gryffindor. Especially if he'd been hiding it for a long time. What i'm trying to say is that your process to take bastard!draco to fluffy!draco may need some work. I'm loving the outcomes though. Maybe just a few paragraphs extra on relationship building.
I hope this helps and doesn't offend. I've read Sometimes we all burn at least 4 times. You come up with the most fantastic plots! |
 starlollie 2004-09-01 . chapter 1so cute I loved it! |
 Fly with me 2004-04-17 . chapter 1wow. really short but i like the idea of the story. |
 CuriousDreamWeaver 2004-04-13 . chapter 1A nice fic. It was interesting, well written and cute. LOL Well done.
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DreamWeaver |
 Kit 2004-02-17 . chapter 1 Ahh. That was nice. Very relaxing. If I could read one of these every day after my classes (math-ugh), I would be so much nicer to people. You're such a good writer. More fluff! ^_^ |
 Rayne-Jelly 2003-12-05 . chapter 1That was pretty cool. I liked Draco's reaction, I liked it very much. Accurate and that. ^_~. |