::still laughing, though quietly cause little sis is asleep:: That was funny and nicely written, thanks for making me laugh, I was bumed out till I read your story.

...Funny! Really funny!

Err...sorry I'm so late in reading yer stories. My fault, entirely. Well, all I have to say is: "Dude...sweet!" More insanity, please!

*gasp* NO! Not the evil; "GOD OF COFFEE BREAKS" AH! *runs around screeming until she runs into a wall* Owchie. I've just come to the realization that running into walls isn't a good idea.

Anywhosits, GO TARU-CHAN! Eat those pastries! YAHH! *Stops and grins* I'm on sugar. ^__^

Ja ne, I'm glad you updated. GO SUGAR-GNOMES! YOU WILL RULE THE WORLD! YAHH! ^__^

Wow...this is getting to be very interesting. Very interesting, indeed. Yuri naughtiness entering this story in such a way is not something I would have predicted. Not at all. Quite a development. I guess this is humor, yes, but there's something indifferent about it. It seems...very silly. Silly is good, but don't give up on the humor. It will come, hopefully, with potent force with due time. I just think your brain needs to spark something up. There are many other styles of humor you can try, such as pure insaneness for one. But, actually, that seems as if it would mess up this story.

Finding a way to integrate laugh-out-loud humor into this story seems like it would be hard for anyone, especially me. But I can't change my assumptions on the story so far, really. Chapter 2 is a bit short(although its contents would make it seem longer), so I should keep the overall opinion I had of the humor for chapter 1, because I do not think you were going for anything funny at all. I dunno if you'd even want to, so it doesn't matter, and you shouldn't listen to my pathetic rambling. I don't mind the story as it is, but I know you could make this downright hilarious if you really wanted to. Do what you want.

And, for the record, thiss review isn't a criticism of the story or either chapter thus far. My point of view as far as what you do in the future are just idiotic thoughts circulating about in my head. The fact is that I like this story, especially with the completion of chapter 2. And...write...you must write more. I must see what happens! What will happen to Heero? What exactly does the title of the story mean? WILL ANY OF THEM EVER INGEST ANY CAFFEINE PERVADED DRINKS? *breathes heavily* Ok...I'll be waiting eagerly for part 3...

Yours truly, hun,

Shinigami!

BECA: MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Evil Haruka, I love it! Heero and Michiru? Very original, I like.

Chibi Ami: Shuwdn't you be dowing youw homework?

BECA: AH! Evil H-word! Run away! *runs away*

C. Ami: *sweatdrops* How dows she wun sow fast?

Chibi Makoto: Hee hee, Hawuka has nawty idewas about Wewena.

Chibi Haruka: *grins evilly* Hey Wewena, come ovew hewe, I have somefing to show wou.

Relena: O.O *runs away* AH! Deranged chibi's! AH!

haha! stupid Relena...

This is a very interesting story. I must say, it isn't terribly humorous yet, but, like that other person stated, but in a different idium...it has a lot of potential to be very awesome. Im sure as it progresses, your humor skills will show brighter. Hell, I found "Our Future Lies Within Our Past" to be quite amusingly funny. I shall be looking forward to more chapters as they reveal themselves. Your humor style is subtle, while mine is much too blatant. I try too hard to make things humorous, and that is why I fail. But if you can use more of a subtle humor style like in "Within Our Past"...dare I say it...my GW humor story shan't be able to compare. I was never any good at humor, and I know you can be. You've just now got everything set up to crack me up, all you've got to do is kick back, and not worry about it. Not sure if you were doing that when writing this chapter or not, and at the very least, it's pretty damned interesting, and I have reason to see what this can evolve into.

One smaller problem, which you already know of...I know close to nil about Sailor Moon. That's a tad of a hindrance, but not so much for this story as your other, so it's very easily overlooked.

Again...it's awesome, and it has flavor. I love how you made their attitudes. The dialogue, as always in your stories, is a very strong element. Everything will work as more chapters come together, and your underlying style of humor will rear it's more potent face. So, yes, I like this story, and I want to see more.

Good job, hun. Miss ya. ^_^

Not that funny yet, but this could become very interesting. I will be watching for the next chapter. Can't wait to see what Relena does when she finds out Haruka is a woman. Ja ne! ^__^