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Rai Dorian 2003-05-10 . chapter 1
I like randomness. ^_^ If only it was longer!
Xalan 2003-04-21 . chapter 1
More Random Rocky-ness! ^_^ Xalan is now a very happy person...

Beautifuly writen as usual, your discriptions are amazing(as usual,^_^), and I love the way you worked with the bombers, the way you discribed them was perfect. Symbolism! ^_^ (and I can't spell anything at the moment...)

Heh, Rock does seem to be a popular person to write angst for...I'm surpised more people haven't writen angst for Tima/Atlas/Duke Red, since all three had good grounds for a little bit of angst...hm, if you ever do more peices like this, I'd love see a Duke Red take. ^_^

And I've rambled on for a bit now, wonderful writting,(it's fun to see people write somethings about Rock when he was a kiddie, ^_^) and I can't wait for more from you!
TiraGiallo 2003-04-16 . chapter 1
T.T sad... waah...

but aside from that, it was really good! nice to get away from the long story fics every once in a while... could you maybe do a bit more? maybe when he gets up or somthing... ^^
Reaalis 2003-04-15 . chapter 1
Hey, that was pretty good. I'm pretty sure I understood everything, and the outlook was certainly good.
Kenichi's Gal 2003-04-10 . chapter 1
Yeah... random... random is good... ^^

I liked the symoblisim you put into this. It gives it kind of a poetic and beautiful feeling.

Wow. More randomly random chapeters soon or is this a one-shot? Hope there's more! ;)
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