wow that was good. though i was hoping that Sarah would go with Jareth. lol oh well, its good.

i really liked your story. not often do i review, which is a good and bad thing, but i just have to say that you described everything so well. it's a story i would like to see you continue on. but i would like to more about barry and the rest of the family of Sarah's.

This is my first review written. I liked this story very much. A Story does not need ot be long to hold alot of emotions.

Wow, this was a really really good story. Glad you posted it keep up your wonderful writting.