Good story fairly well written. How about an update sometime soon.

very good story can't wait for more.

No gotchas found in the last episode.
In this one:
*with relative easy.” he said.* -- ease?
*programmed to be adjective, * -- objective?

Okay, now I'm waiting for the other shoe(s) to drop. After Vorlons, come Vogons, Gamellons, Krell, Borg... Could get interesting, if it doesn't become as confusing as some of metroanime's work.

Mike

"didn't know expect for Yuka" - except? Sometimes a spell checker isn't enough.
Mike

"as a rot iron fence" - an interesting description. Would "wrought" serve better?
Since I (involuntarily) became an author my proofreading ability has increased substantially. This is both good and bad - it's a source of amusement and pain. So far reading this work has been amusing...
Good story so far, though.
Mike

"digressions was the better part of valor" - now there's an interesting thought! Did you intend to write "discretion"?

If Ranma has taken down Herb, and the entire Amazon nation could not stand against him, why does the combination of Kuno and Ryoga (with or without 70 other morons) constitute a threat?
MIke

"Ranma does not true me." .. he doesn't 'true' me either, but I hope someday he will 'trust' me...
"the old the old matriarch" -- "he told the old matriarch"?

Oh well, nobody is perfect.
Mike

""Uh." Ranma let out not know what that was about." ... I'm sorry, that just does not scan.

It's beginning to look like the kind of story I really like, but (like my own stories) folks are a little out-of-character.
Mike

"Almost over a thousand miles away" ... almost over?? And you were doing so well...
Akane put her "cut" in the koi pond instead of her "cup" - not very sanitary.

However, it appears to be a fine story off to a good start.
Mike

A good addition although the descriptions of power associated with Darius, his ship, etc, was a little distracting from the main story.

This is still a quite good story. One nitpick on this chapter is you have the central AI turning life support back on. From a general design perspective, critical systems are generally self contained. Perhaps the AI could direct resources to repair them, but they should remain active without the AI's direct control.

Overall this is a pretty good story. The biggest issues I see are the realization Akane came to was not adequately covered to explain their changed relationship. In fact, this kind of thing was probably worth a couple chapters in itself. The second issue is the powers your giving Akane and now Ranma. They seem a bit overpowered.

wow. love it! you do crossovers very very well.

This is a repost, right? Still, I think I saw a few small differences, and it still read vvery well, and will be curious to see how things go as time goes on for Ranma, Akane, and the Senshi, as well as what will be waiting for them long term and what help or hindrance Darius needs, as well as how he and Saturn continue to get along.

Oh goodie, here's a sue.
..just for your information, "magnitude" does not mean what you think it means. "Several thousand times stronger than the silence wall" would be bad enough; "several thousand orders of magnitude stronger" would mean it's capable of taking a big bang head-on without noticing, and I'm not being hyperbolic here.