Interesting couple; I liked how you pulled it off. The ending was definitely my favorite part. Very cute, kind of funny, definitely sweet.

I think there could be a prequel to this showing when they realized their interest in each other. But it is pretty good.

Yay! Good story! I liked it! Lots! Much better than my babblings I've been writing as of late. Like this rambling. I'll be quiet now...

hee hee hold your hand might not have been a bad name for it... I've never seen the show, but it sounds pretty interesting. I like it so far, although I'm not that big on slash but it was still good. So that caught my eye is the name of the ship, it's my name too! I almost jumped when i saw it. keep writing, I think this is coming along pretty well.