is there going to be a second part to this story? i hope so its good

Very well done.

You captured the two characters very well...it made the whole fic believable. Very well done!

Good. Interesting. Severus/Remus is not my ship, but this is good. *lol* To think of what would've happened had Remus not heard them coming... hee hee...

you know, i really hate fanfiction.net for stories(bad grammer and all), but you did really well. I love Lupin/snape!

aww.. *smiles* That's just adorable.

Wow! Are you contining it? let me know plez if you do

I love your writing - you perfectly capture the emotions of Sev and Remus without going overboard. It's almost understated, which makes the descriptions even more powerful in my opinion.

Break my heart why don't you? Oh, that was wonderful. Delicately done and soft, very graceful. My only qualm would be the quickness in which they were saved. I love this story. MM, very delicious, bittersweet but optimistic. Will there be more?

Excellent.

Beautifully written... as always

It was so tragic and intense and sad and hopeful at the same time. I love this fic.

Lovely. thanks for giving them a second chance, of sorts, at least for a while.