Dang powerful first cahppie! Please write more. Im intriuged as to how this story is going to play out!

I like the beginning it could become a good book. Please up date!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

sweet
i love the storie
update soon
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hey i luv this story when r u gonna update?!? plz soon i gotta no whts up w it!

Sweet!

Hm... Interesting story idea.

Please update! Who sent Hermione the letter? I have to know.

really good, but you HAVE to continue soon! i dont even care how long it is! just update!

cool

O O O O O HM interesting are you going to type any more? it sounds interesting and i would love to read more Please UPDATE!

so far, so good. I like it. Can't wait to read the rest.

Thanks for reviewing my story! :) I love your description of Hermione! Please update soon!

hey, this is good :D, why haven't you written another chappie missy? :P
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I'm really interested and will be checking back soon to see if you have written more.


By the way. You ould put it just a little more into details, like go in depth bout the characters feelings and stuff, and not quite as fast-paced. But great!..update soon!