A great story. Very good.

Bravo! There's a definate shortage of Lorne stories on FF.net and this is just the sort of thing that Lorne fans want.
P.S. Would that mean that Lorne was Andy Hallet?
Carry on writing!

This is a cute story. I wish on the show they would have an episode where lorne becomes human for a day.

Yes, this was a really nice story. I can definitely see both Lorne's & Fred's points of view. It's not easy being green. Good job.