B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.

Interesting. Is this just a quick character vignette, or is this the intro to a longer story? Either way, i think you've captured the essence of Akane's heart.

Nice, a really good piece.

Are you going to do one on Ranmas thoughts?

I really liked this story. It goes deep into Akane's character and shows development and feeling. Really great story, I hope to see more from you soon.

Wow. Akane's mind is confusing

Wow, I liked this a lot. A whirlwind of thoughts indeed, and such thoughts that show Akane's frustrations, character devlopment, and inner-most feelings.

This was great! Thank-you for sharing!

Short.

A bit moody, I might add. P

-ja