it`s a very interesting story you have here...can`t wait to read what will come next :)

I really wish I'd read the book you crossed this with.

OK I'm left with more questions then answers and
with a hell of a cliffhanger. Update! This is
going to drive me nuts!

I hope I see a Kasumi/Ranma pairing in the works.
This Akane seems way too violent.

LOL. I love the reactions of people entering Nermia.

I have no idea what they were talking abought
but I'm sure it will be easy to see after a
few more chapters. I hate that! *grin*

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I just thought of something weird. It would be... 'ironic' if both Ranma's forms were the two that were being searched for...

Ok - hmm. Looks interesting. You've done a considerable amount of 'stage setting' so far, no complaining, just commenting on it. It will depend on what you do in the forthcoming chapters as to whether they served their purpose or not.

One thing that has definately got me curious is just how are you going to get Ryoga to give up on his 'kill Ranma' routine. My curiousity is based on your scenes in chapter two where Ryoga is has been having dreams about the same thing that Ranma drempt about and the (for lack of a better term) searcher who is seeking both the guardian and ward in Nermia. Based on your story to date they appear to be Ranma and Ryoga, hence the question - what is going to get Ryoga to mellow out?

Also curious to see if your Kasumi/Ranma scene was the first hint of K/R pairing. Is so I say go for it. Got no problems with that.

For the most part well written, some spelling errors, but a story that has looking forward to the next chapter.

Glad to see it and looking forward to seeing more.

Dude, you got parts 1 and 2 switched around.

I would like anti Akane,anti Genma,anti Amazans,anti Happoasi,anti Ryouga,anti Kuno and her sister,anti Nabiki and anti Ukyo and like to see them suffer and pain,etc.

I am enjoying this. Is it just me, or are you leaning to a Ranma/Kasumi matchup?

Interesting... Surprises us? Maybe have the Spirit Ward, who I get the distinct impression has to be female, to be someone normally not the in the main 'light', like Hinako or something?

^_^

very good!! keep going please! i like it!

Seems interesting, no obvious problems with spelling or grammar, and not really enough information to make a comment on the storyline, but it has potential.

I would suggest that you make so that anonymous reviews i accepted, it's up to you, but it makes you seem less like an **.

Ahem, all in all, good job so far, keep it up.