 Wobbly 2005-06-03 . chapter 1Great work.. Everything a good story needs.. Thanks and keep going.. |
 EveLGW 2003-04-13 . chapter 1What a wonderful post-ep!
Sentences like 'At least that way I wouldn’t have to realize that he’s probably not looking for me anymore. I would never even know who he was. It’s hard to miss what you’ve never had.' made me all *sniff*. Your interpretation of that last scene really got to me and the characterization was great. I loved it. Please keep on writing! |
 Evidence 2003-04-11 . chapter 1A "victory" of a story- nice details and exploring the back story and future issues brought up in the episode. I really, really enjoyed it! |
 sheisnotreal 2003-04-11 . chapter 1How the heck did you write this so quickly?!?!
Beautiful characterizations as always. The whole lost/found theme is so appropriate for these guys.
And this really made me reevaluate the episode from a different perspective. I think it made me understand Sam a little more than I did last night. You have great insight into her; you bring her alive on the computer screen, even with just words. Lovely. |
 Eolivet 2003-04-11 . chapter 1 Sigh. That was great, MC -- I loved how you interpreted their feelings, their emotions -- that whole scene from both of their perspectives. The meaning behind the dialogue was so especially touching. Again, you prove the talent you have with words! Keep writing! |