Well, this is FIVE years late, but I really enjoyed this.

The recent MESSIAH COMPLEX storyline has renewed my interest in CABLE. He's still somewhat of a mystery to me...This was great glimpse into his soul.

Good work.

Well-written. Descriptive, and the relationship between Nate and Dom is so naturally realistic that I HAVE to laugh (seeing as my oldest bro and I are SO similar, taunts and stubborn threats and mean jokes et cetera).

I remember coming across this story when it was original posted over at Alternate Timelines. I think it's very introspective and true to the characters, and very descriptive. The Cable/Domino relationship/dialouge was captured beatuifuly. It was tense and light at the same and not your usual shoot/em up action/adventure mission that Cable and Domino are usally sent on, so it was nice to a different take on the pair.