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| MAru-chan 2005-02-11 ch 2, anon. | abusehi! wonderful fic, i really liked it, just wondering when were you going to updated it. (^_^) bye bye! |
| Syaoronsangel 2003-07-21 ch 2,  | abuseAt first I was kinda confused cause I forgot what happened in chapter 1, but that's ok! ^-^` That was so sad, the letter was. I could tell she really misses Eriol. Poor kid. Anyway, keep up the great work and don't forget to email me! ~Syaorons angel |
| Dana Daidouji 2003-07-09 ch 2, | abuseHello! Some scenes were confusing to me but I think I sorted it our right. I like this story, so please, update soon! XD |
| MoMo-ChAn (eternally lazy a... 2003-07-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseNeed a beta reader? I would be more than happy to. This is a good fic. I'm a beta reader for a friend of mine (her spelling and grammar suck)and I think I do a pretty good job. Like I said, this is really good and I would be ecstatic if I got to beta read this. Hee hee, just sucking up a little. ^_^ |
| KyteAura 2003-07-07 ch 2, | abuseIt was good. Continue soon. |
| Shattered Midnight Dreams 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, yes, I like. The writing is very sophisticated, and I like the way everything is a little vague, so you have to work out the finer points of detail yourself. You might say that everything's a little... Blurry! Ha ha ha! (*I am aware that that wasn't funny, btw*) Shattered Midnight Dreams |
| not applicable 2003-07-04 ch 2, | abuseI like this fic very much. A little on the sad side, but I never mind it. I love the way you write. |
| hitokiri-tomoe 2003-07-04 ch 2, | abuseBeautiful, as is usual. ^^ And a tearjerker, too, as usual. ^^ You're converting me into an E/T shipper! No! You can't do that since I'm writing a story wherein Tomoyo and Eriol are not together... You are such a great writer my friend... I am so jealous! Write more, and where's the update for Snow in Autumn? Gotta go now, my mom's gonna kill me. And I'm not even sleepy yet! |
| Ofi 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abuse*looks a bit confused* is that the end you had me suffering!! i noticed very few mistakes though! |
| Nadine 2003-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere are certain bits in the story, especially after part of the song has been written, when i'm not sure which part of the story you are in now...maybe it is your intention for the readers to read the conversation before deciphering the present situation of the story, but if eel that it is a very taxing thing to do... maybe, after a part of the song's been written, you can give a little paragraph to explain to the readers where and what just or will happen so that the readers won't be confused... yeah, that's about it... (",) |
| hitokiri-tomoe 2003-06-02 ch 1, | abuseNice! But I must admit that your other ones are better. This one didn't make me cry... lol... anyway, keep up the good work, my favorite author! ^^ |
| Shorna 2003-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseUp! Up! Coco! |
| Syaoronsangel 2003-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAw poor Tomoyo! I really want to know what will happen! Please update soon! Please email me with a link each time you update! THanks and keep up the great work! Ja Ne! ~Syaorons angel |
| D a r k n e s s in H e a r ... 2003-04-14 ch 1, | abuseizzat all? that's not all, rite? AH, if it's not the end, yu gotta write more of it! and soon! |
| Kala 2003-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's a bit confusing about Tomoyo and Eriol's age. But so far, this story is really awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter~ |