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Reviews for: Watching Thoughts
Werecat99
2003-04-18 . chapter 1
That was just stunning! I loved both POVs, as well as their differences. Both were true to Tolkien's spirit and you have done a good job showing the differences between human and elf.

Needless to say I loved every word of it.
ErinRua
2003-04-13 . chapter 1
Hello Andria ~

This is wonderful! A worthy entry to the How Do I Love Thee challenge, and I think the differing styles really work. I like the more brief, sparing verse for Aragorn, a Ranger speaking few words but words that matter greatly, and then Arwen's words more "classic" in feel, the more deeply-thought emotions of a woman waiting - for however long it takes. Very charming choice of styles! Well done!
Cheers ~

Erin
Marnie
2003-04-12 . chapter 1
Awesomely good! I particularly liked Aragorn's with its repeating refrain, but Arwens matched it well, and one did give a sense of time passing, while the other was as still as eternity.
Lovely!
Dweller in the Deep
2003-04-12 . chapter 1
Very smooth. They’re both good, but I like Aragorn’s better.
Orangeblossom Took1
2003-04-11 . chapter 1
These are beautiful! Great job.
ambertiger666
2003-04-11 . chapter 1
hreat and lovely poem!
shirebound
2003-04-11 . chapter 1
Wow. Arwen's poem is particularly wondrous, Alawa! It's so graceful, and poignant, and we get a glimpse of the beauty and nobility she sees in Aragorn. Excellent.
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