 Werecat99 2003-04-18 . chapter 1That was just stunning! I loved both POVs, as well as their differences. Both were true to Tolkien's spirit and you have done a good job showing the differences between human and elf.
Needless to say I loved every word of it. |
 ErinRua 2003-04-13 . chapter 1Hello Andria ~
This is wonderful! A worthy entry to the How Do I Love Thee challenge, and I think the differing styles really work. I like the more brief, sparing verse for Aragorn, a Ranger speaking few words but words that matter greatly, and then Arwen's words more "classic" in feel, the more deeply-thought emotions of a woman waiting - for however long it takes. Very charming choice of styles! Well done!
Cheers ~
Erin |
 Marnie 2003-04-12 . chapter 1Awesomely good! I particularly liked Aragorn's with its repeating refrain, but Arwens matched it well, and one did give a sense of time passing, while the other was as still as eternity.
Lovely! |
 Dweller in the Deep 2003-04-12 . chapter 1Very smooth. They’re both good, but I like Aragorn’s better. |
 Orangeblossom Took1 2003-04-11 . chapter 1These are beautiful! Great job. |
 ambertiger666 2003-04-11 . chapter 1hreat and lovely poem! |
 shirebound 2003-04-11 . chapter 1Wow. Arwen's poem is particularly wondrous, Alawa! It's so graceful, and poignant, and we get a glimpse of the beauty and nobility she sees in Aragorn. Excellent. |