just looking at my old reviews..doubt you'll read this because its like two years later...but hey...
lol i thought the spy was a man but i guess i was wrong...you should really continue...honestly, its really good.

You did a good job.
Most excelent.
And most random.
More?
Well, I'll review again when you have more.
TTYL, Keita D'Nathair, the Serpent, Silent Assasin, Doer of All Things Dishonourable, Keeper of Snakes, Crusader of Rats, Lady Poisoner, and Informat For All Reasons.

I'm kinda lost, but it's a cool lsot.

Why do you hate jon? He is the BEST!

Anyway, I'm not one of those jon-lovers that will lecture u, but how did you get those colors for your summary?

Please Read my stories. If u don't like Jon, read "Past Lives", there is no real romance in it, only flashbacks.

Yes, very insane. Very, very insane. She reminds me of at least half the people I know. Of course she's smarter than them...

But really. The lying trick is true. For me at least. I can't lie, I'm just really bad at it. *sigh* Oh yes, I *am* a weird reviewer.

*Hysterical lauching heard in background*

I really have to praise you for your fantastic writing here. I can imagine that it's a lot harder to write like this than it is to write 'proper' English.

Her personality is getting more and more interesting by the minute, haha...

hehehehe! she's completely loco! hehehehe, and is she spying for scanra?

Me? Review much? *shifty eyes* You must be thinking of someone else... Hah, although I'll be more frequent when spring break arrives. Ah well. I'm glad your muse came along for this chapter. I hope he visits again soon... ^_^

Peace, love, and blueberry jello,
~Edi~

o o o o o o how jolly a spy!! soz a bit high anywayz update soon

I love her accent and that she's a bit crazy, very funny. I'm looking forward to more.

Hmm, what to say? I really like this beginning. I hope you continue. In fact, I strongly advise that you do continue. *threatening glance* Ah, no, I'm not a very menacing kind of person... Yet. *insert evil laugh here* I don't usually add stories to my Favorites quickly, since I'm pretty choosy about what goes, but I'm really liking this, so... *clicks box at bottom* Now, don't you have incentive to FINISH this? *smiles sweetly*

Peace, love, and blueberry jello,
-Edi-

kool.. sounds good so far. bit off her rocker.. i spose we all are really! is the king shes mentioning king jon?? cos' i never thought he would take on mistresses unless im juming to the wrong end of the gun... nehoo update soon...10 chapters... that would be kool...

= ) this makes me happy

*jaw hits the floor* Wow...

:) This is really amazingly good. I like how you make the way she talks(or the way she would if she did) come out into her thought prosses.

WRITRE MORE!

I think it should be more then ten chapters, but that's just me.

Sounds good. I thinks it must be hard to write with an accent- Ack! Great job with it though... By the way, I'll start on Gem Three this weekend or next week- I have spring break. Wahoo!
~ladyknight

well, looks very promising as a first chapter. very original idea too.
i'm glad you got hit with inspiration again. hopefully you'll keep it up.
~krizsta