Reviews for Hopeless Light

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Takarilvr 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseWHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL KARI?!?!?!? why?
Link 2006-04-10 ch 7, anon.	abuseyou ruined the whole story with that ending...
T_T 2006-03-26 ch 7, anon.	abuseu just had to make hakari die didn't u...sigh o well great story
hahah 2005-10-29 ch 7, anon.	abuseI like the last chapter - I personally don't like certain fighting scenes in general... But seriously, how can you smile when someone like that just died? And a few dialogue contain absolutely corny material [e.g. last chapter, 6 lines of hikari...shoulda been 3 lines max - the rest is not necessary and well, crap] At first, I thought the story's taking quite long and I dun wanna waste more time unless the ending's good...and well, it is!
review lord 2005-03-04 ch 7,	abuseHA HA shes dead YAY (no offense) but she deserved it, and one more thing: WHERE THE HELL WAS EVERYBODY ELSE, THEY DIDN'T EVEN BOTHER TO LOOK FOR THEIR OWN TEAM MATES, AND WHAT THE HELL IS TAI GOING TO WHEN HE FINDS OUT HIS LITTLE SISTER IS DEAD, that would be hilarious, all well gret story
review lord 2005-03-04 ch 6,	abuseyeah I think the story has just taken a twist, but as always light has to screw up everything, great job anyway
review lord 2005-03-04 ch 5,	abuseahahahahahahahahaahahahaha tk played her like a fool, and now its BATTLE time ahahahahahahahaha, great job, that was one heck of a plan
review lord 2005-03-04 ch 4,	abuseOH **, THAT WAS SICK (in the good way), the way he said that was to beautiful, from patamon sensing something wasn't right to daemon going into rage, and tk having a SURPRISE, great job this chapter it was the BEST so far
review lord 2005-03-03 ch 3,	abuseahahahahahahahahahaha that was so freaking funny how ivy was seducing him and kari keeps running into the wall, but theres one large gap in his plan the fact patamon, knows tk VERY well and he's quite smart, great job
review lord 2005-03-03 ch 2,	abusego daemon, go go thats the boy, great job
review lord 2005-03-03 ch 1,	abuseahahahahahahahaha darkness RULES, great start, but what did kari do to tk anyway
neshia 2005-02-02 ch 7, anon.	abusehow does he break it to tia that his sister is dead
catwomon 2004-10-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI realy like the first page.
Syke 2004-03-04 ch 7, anon.	abuseHey no flames here I like this story(:(but y did Kari have 2 die?).Neway I like all the fics I've read of yurs and hope u keep writin'.C'Ya I off 2 read another 1 of yur fics buh bye!!
miaow227 2003-10-28 ch 7,	abuseTwo things: 1) That was such a sad ending! I nearly cried. It's different, usually she would come back to life or miraculously get better or something...so sad! And... 2) I know this fic was finished quite a while ago, but...you have to finish Trading Spaces! It is one of my favourite fics! No seriously, it's in my top five somewhere and I read a lot of fanfics( about 5-6 hours everyday to be precise). Please?

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