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| Cabbeh 2004-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just...wow. -blinks in amazement- Kind of a cliche ending, and trust me, it's been used before; but it gave me a kind of..you know..a kind of happy feeling, knowing how sad and depressing the ending of The Sight really is XD I like how you've written it from Kar's PoV; I've never read a fic from his PoV before, and he's probably the most well-liked char in the fandom! (My fav just happens to be Bran xD) Well, good job with this one, I really like it. Hope to read more from you soon! =DD Later! -Cabby |
| Amaroq 2004-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abusehey i loved your story. it was definetley ne of the best i've ever read. i read that book and still remember the last line "For in the beginning there was light." keep writing more good stories |
| PhantomVarg 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abuseAw... Thats so sweet! Larka lived in this one! Way to go! we need more of those!! |
| Litwolf 2003-11-08 ch 1, | abusevery sweet, too bad this did not happen in the book |
| HiratsuPhoenix 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseI.. I JUST LOVED IT. I DID. |
| Calmer of the Storm 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseSomebody: Yes, I did read the book. It's one of my all time favorites (along with his other book, firebringer=)). I really only wrote this for my personal enjoyment. See, I was mad when Larka died, that I had to bring her to life. Teehee, so this is how I did it. I'm sorry that you didn't like it, but, we all have those things, right? And yeah, I'm not perfect, I'm human. I make mistakes. Angel of Light=) |
| Somebody 2003-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, since I'm the first, I going to point out all the mistakes. In the second line you made a mistake. And if you READ the book you would know that in the last line in the second verse, it's "In the mind of the Man Varg, who shall be free?" And in about the "Larka's blessing" part? It's when they enter someone else's terrtory. And the ending is kind of bad. |