Ow. My head is about to friggin' ESPLODE!

All in all, this is the greatest story I've read on fanfiction.

Now excuse me while I go mentally vomit from too much reading.

Which now seems possible.

Ow.

Digivolve from Digimon and Power up from Power Rangers.

Agony comes back yet again. It's bad enough that she's virtually invincible, but now she's back. And there's hell to pay. Yay.

I didn't see any Anime refs in here. I did see a Silence of the Lambs reference, though. The fava beans mention.

Hm... Well, I got a sneak peak at Redemption (albeit he was called Retribution) when I read Physics Police. Man that was funny...

Wunnerful. Two Agony's. That's bad, right?

Chibi Usa and Pokemon were the references in this chapter.

Wait, if Vagane was the one who raped Patricia's mother, wouldn't he be admitting that he had humanistic characteristics/desires?

Meh.

Why is it that there is a reference to my family in you and your sister's stories? A character named Kate whose pregnant. Collins. Dang it's annoying...

Well, I don't really have anything to complain about other than the fact that it took me about an hour to read this chapter. Man this story is longer than hell...

Apparently you and LM both have a thing for long, drawn-out fight scenes.

Good chapter, though. Really.

*twitch* Ow my head...

You know, as much as the conflict Erik, Agony, and Vagane rocks my socks... this isn't really much of a Dragon Ball Z story. At least this chapter isn't.

Twenty five is not old after all.

I've come to pay homage to a story I read a million years ago. While I can't say that it is as good as I remember it... or even that I remember the vestiges of its plot at all, I did manage to pull the name "Ash the Wanderer" out of my head. This from a person who barely remembers her own name half the time.

So... homage homage homage. Okay I'm done.

Loved it! Of course, by the time I found this fic, you'd already finished it. So I decided not to waste my valuable time (HA!) writing out a whole review for each chapter, instead waiting for the end.

However, this meant I couldn't point out all of the anime references (Eric digi-volve into... MEGA-ERIC!!). How ever I have to say... Soulfire rules. That guy -uh- sword is hilarious! Can't wait to read more stories about the Legacy!

I did read Consuming Madness, but on a nother site. So I didn't leave a review for that. I loved it though, I even rather liked the Goten/marron romance... Even though I am a Goten fangirl myself! (Many stories I have planned involve killing Pareasu... However if anyone other then me gets Goten, it might as well be Marron)

So... Love the story! Is there going to be a sequel? (or whatever you call the sequel to a sequel!) If so... I wanna read it! The Z warriors better be involved in that one too!

YOU RULE! THE GREAT OZZARU ANGEL PRAISES YOU!

This story has been aswome, i love how you made Goku invaild most the story Goku always get to save the Day and Vegeta played the better role in the story and i love ERIK! please i could live with a third story and i am sorry for yelling at you about buffy

I have loved this story along with CM but i am sorry i felt it my duty to mention you should have not brought buffy into the story it has taken me a great deal of strength to keep from stop reading this story becuase of that, on a lighter note i think the use of orginal cahnraters and the long amout of time spent on the is ok, this may be DBZ the the OC's are as important as the non-ocs, i also belive when this is finished if or if its alrdeay that you should do a story just on legacy when to return maybe how the destory agony since apeerntly she is still not dead, and maybe do short 1-5 chapter stories on the backgroung of the legacy memebers i wiould love to read thoese

=)

Where to start...possibly your best work. Hard to choose between Consuming Maddness and Atrocities. Although it saddens me that you will not be writing Dbz fanfiction as much anymore you still left a legacy of great fics. I applaud your great works, and respect your decision.

May your life be happy and blessed,
Danichan667

And so its over. Well, Celeste didn't need reviving, but there was still originality.

So that's how Agony survived the Spirit Bomb this time... She found something of her own essence in it, and Vagane had made the attackers just too weak. Nice finale, definitely... And they actually managed to win against someone with powers close to Omega Shenron - what am I saying, no one can ever compare to the supreme Draconic Master, Bane of All Existence, and True Essence of the Dragonballs, Sin Shenron!!

*Cough cough.* Anyways, that was nice. I was surprised Riot and Bloodbath did leave, and I would hope that your comments in your Bio about recently returning means you'll finally get around to writing the next 'Saga' in this 'Multiverse' of Saiyans and sorcerers and cyborgs.

Suspicious, I looked back at parts of Consuming Madness. I must have misread certain things, as I withdraw my swearing complaints. Heck, I withdraw my complaints about the group not trying to vape Agony early on. Chapter 3, after Agony survived Gotenks' attack... I assume, and will trust I'm right, that the reason they didn't go for a vape after the "Regenerate this!!" didn't work was that her surviving simply brought down all the stress they had on them. Chapter 6... I should've paid more attention, but I seemed to overlook a couple of things because I was annoyed by certain battle tactics in it. Yes, I see the group was trying to work around or vape her, and failed. And noticed the fact you mentioned the Super Saiyan 4s grew tails there.

Sorry.

So, where can Riot and Bloodbath get their new power? Perhaps from the same thing Erik had? Whatever it is, I hope next time, whatever it is, the Z Warriors don't get too badly humiliated... Get working on the sequel to this before I throw a Minus Power Ball at a random planet and destroy the entire Legacy universe!

I've also read the in between stories. David Solomus is indeed a believable, sad story. I sympathize with him, but at the same time I feel he let the people pick on him as well. Even if they had money and David had none, thus they could get a corrupt lawyer if he tried to press charges, he can always take classes in psychiatric wards. Et cetera. And they would almost certainly help. You didn't say anything about how if he stood up for himself at school himself and bluntly told people to mind their own business or whatnot, but I hope he did there. Other than that, I pity him.

I hope King Yemma didn't send the poor guy into the Home for Infinite Losers... Lame, I know, but that is just too funny. I wonder what Erik and Celeste would have thought of him. I imagine Erik might, might, have viewed him through the, "Who are you to choose who lives and who dies!?" lens. Celeste... I don't know, considering how in good ways what she went through parallels Kyle.

Vegeta as Super Saiyan 5: Tell me, does that form truly exist in your canon? Oh, here's an idea. Riot and Bloodbath achieve that level, Erik has to go to the Z World because he's only able to keep himself and Celeste alive from the ascension shockwave with his Redemption sword and/or Angel of Death powers... Bah, lame, quite possibly, and you'd be the writer anyway thinking up the ideas. They may have lost Goku's power, but they have Saiyan genetics. One of them, Erik's powers of destruction. The other, Super Saiyan 5 somehow.

And maybe this time, Celeste can go through her final catharsis with her issues? UUb can be the hero? You can write adventure and cataclysm, and I don't want 'Dragonball Legacy' to be over for a good long while. So get writing!

Both your main stories I think highly of now, and the same goes for the other three ones in between (despite the fact Goku's dream really makes little sense now if it wasn't from Vagane, yet was somehow a metaphorical warning; who sent it and why??) but possibly this one the most. And by the way, those little details, like Vegeta calling Goku by his Earth name were great. Now please give us more, if you're not already doing so.

Now, let's see if you have a story about the Xaxergeek crisis tucked away in your Website somewhere, young or otherwise.