beautiful story. too bad i have to wait until tomorow to finish it.

Ah, I quite like it so far! Ohh, and Kyle and David happen to be my two favorite boy names... Kyle being the name of my child on Harvest Moon 64 and David on Back to Nature. Just thought that was pretty neat. Anyway, just had to comment. I really like how you write... can't wait to read the rest!

*sighs* Ah, well... Elli IS a cutie... only right Jack'd like her so much...
But...
I feel sorry for the Doc. Really.
...
His impassiveness scare me. You never know what he could be thinkin'...

I just finished reading Whispers in the Moonlight again. It just keeps getting better and better as I keep reading. I hope you can write more stories,
I really enjoy reading your work.

Your biggest fan,
Shang

Now I feel more complete finally having read this. ^_^ Great characterization, and you do a great job at tugging on people, you know?

One word.
0_0

Oh... so THAT'S how it happened. I've been wondering... *baka me for reading the sequel first* Anyway, great great great. Glad Karen was mature about.
Still kinda can't help but think SHE'S not over him... hm...

You're really tugging on me here. And I don't cry. Don't make me cry, goddamnit! XD
I'm gonna keep reading. I really love it so far.

Konichiwa!
T_T That was one of the best stories I have ever read. ~cries~ (Damn that Jack! Elli's mine, hahahaha!) I hope I make one of your reviewer lists.
Shang

FINNALY! ^_^ A good story 'bout Elli. I've lookin' 4 1 4 a long time! I always choose Elli. In any version of HM. It was great! ^_^
U should write a sequence 4 their wed day, and when they have kidz! well goodday! ^_^

Awesome fic! The best I've ever read so far, seriously! I'm adding you and this fic to my favorites ;)

Aw! I loved it, great ending=3

Great fic, I loved it! I think you add a chapter about them getting married and another few about them having their kids and the other couples too. Otherwise, yay for your fic!!

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

XD Oh, that was a good ficcy; It would be kewlies if you made another chapter with a little description of the wedding, and like 1 year later when they have their kid. o.o; Just a suggestion.