Please keep writing this story. I read a long time ago and I'm still waiting to see what happens next. So please keep writing.

No. It was not Okoto from the fateful day Kaya witnessed. It was Nago. Close enough. Good story.

I've read your story and I thought it pretty good. Please continue; I want to find out what happens later

I think your story is very good. I hope that you will be able to finish it because I really want to know what hap0pens next.

oh my, they went in the wrong direction!! what will happen to them? what about Kaya? what about San? so many questions! update so I won't be so confused!! ~Pheonix

Well, it's unexpected, but why is there so little Ashitaka/ San interaction? I want see them together. Good story other than this.

Yay! you updated! I really like this fanfic and i cant wait till you update again.
Happy writing! ^-^

this story was pretty good, and i look forward to seeing your others, but i want to know one thing. why did ashitaka come home? wasnt he banished forever when he left his tribe? maybe you should watch the movie again.
-ender

yay you finaly up-dated. ^_^ it was really good to. ^_^ i'v been waiting forever for u to up-date. well bye
momo_chan

I really like this story. Please update soon

*rofl!* meyojojo is like my best friend!! *is laughing histarically* i can't belive she actually was smart enough to spell words? wow... now she's complaining about me using too big of words. don't listen to her, she's been to the loony bin and ouch...she just hit me...and would say she's a good person but...she's kinda weird *trying to say stuff that won't get her hit* um...she's nice, but she can't spell worth beans. but anyways...nice story i like it. and i better not say anything mean or else she'll take away Chrono Cross...but don't listen to da crazy momo-chan...especially if it's about me...i most likely she'll say a thing or two about me...sorry...i'm just a lil off topic. ^_^' well see ya later and momo-chan if you read this...LEARN HOW TO USE A DICTIONARY! or at least how to say Metropolis...

Please update soon!

That was god as usual! e-mail me when u up-date. With school and all i have only enough time to check my mail! Please write more! Momo is only my nick name to my friends. bye

yay you finaly up-dated. That was a really good chapter! I can't beleve it stoped! You better right more! ^_^__^_^__^ Cant wait itll the next chapter!

Momo-chan

Please update soon!