I've never read Sendoh X Ayako before... I liked this story. Maybe even I should write one with that pairing. You really should finish this story.

pls. continue...^_^

wow! how come I didn't read it before? hmm,.. very nice! I love it...!! please continue.. please... huhuhuhu..

hmm... sendou is a bit OOC there, but it's still pretty good!!

haha, love the paper fan.

im not realyl into SendouxAyako, but this fic is quite interesting. :D

Poor ryouta... xD

This might be blasphemous to my RyotaxAyako OTP, but this fic is hilarious. Now that I think about it, Sendoh and Ayako make a good couple--Sendoh's happy-go-lucky while Ayako's a bit rigid...oh what fun. :) I have to say I can conjure up of a LOT of drabbles involving these two since reading this. Good job!

ei it was great! please continue!

i know this is a fairly old fic already, but i still do hope this gets updated. The idea of senaya is not a very popular one, but it’s rather interesting. and i find the casual/informal way you have presented this fiction really entertaining. ^_^

interesting...i've been looking for a senaya fic for a long time!it's good you made one!my long search has finally ended!looking forward to the next chapter!

Well, a very interesting fic indeed.
Some grammatical error here and there, but in the end is very nice.
Is this the end?

Yeah. It's me...

Tis' the last fic I read from you.

... er, is it complete?

very good fanfic. update soon!nice pairing.

heehee.. really funny! finish this, onegai? unique ne! ;)

Haha, more like will he still be in one piece for the end of year prom dance..thingy...

i remember your old fic!! i like this rewrite, it's tighter with snappier lines. it's got that absurd comical quality to it which is appropriate since slam dunk does employ this quality in the manga..

some suggestions: fix your grammatical errors. spotting grammatical errors can break the flow of a story.
have more conflict to give the story an edge...

if i remember, this was a nice light hearted fic that i looked forward to reading to in the past, probably will do the same with the re-write :)

happy writing!

ulrike is a nice name!! hehehhe...and yeah, sendoh is very blatant! SenAya rules!