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| americangrl69 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseLove it. I love their little girl. She's so cute. But you so have to update. Please. |
| ickle_angel@hotmail.com 2006-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei thought max was in it |
| don't have one, but hey 2004-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the ending. And the Spanish. And the insults. Very original. And Hilarious. (I have a thing against commas at the moment). |
| Joe 2003-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story, would just like to see more of it posted. |
| cheeseontoast 2003-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abusereally good hope u write more soon |
| mel11 2003-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was very very good. It made me laugh. You better write more soon. K? Ol'ver went boom! Very funny. I'll be watching for more. :D:D:D |
| Lexie Jayne 2003-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG, I LOVE THIS! I love the last scene with Syl and Zane - that's the absolute BEST! YOU ROCK! C'mon, write chapter two :D |