i really liked this story! is sydney going to tell vaughn at some point? who were the guys in the apartment? i have lots of q's lol
please keep writing!

Wow, that's a lovely story! It's so lyrical. Normally I don't like stories written in the present tense but I hardly noticed it in this because it just seemed to fit perfectly.

Very good. What's Avika mean? I loved it. :) I would write more praise but its 11:30 and I just woke up LoL