  emily 2007-05-04 . chapter 3 i so love this story...can't wait to read when ebony kicks jays a**! more please |
| gEM 2005-06-18 . chapter 3 LOVE IT, PLEASE UP DATE!1 |
 Angelique Blanchard 2004-08-21 . chapter 3this is an awesome story! keep it up! |
| Sarah 2004-08-15 . chapter 2 More? |
| A Kiss From A Rose 2004-07-18 . chapter 1 Please...More soon |
| Sarah 2004-07-17 . chapter 3 I want more!! |
| suicide-greeting 2004-05-05 . chapter 3 love it i can't wait for more:) |
| mystic-wings 2004-03-28 . chapter 3 that was a good story
and i don't mean to be rude but
HURRY UP AND RIGHT THE NEXT CHAPTER
please! |
| CocoTapioka 2004-03-09 . chapter 3 Wow, that was really cool. And I hope Ebony turns Ram against Jay...he'd get what's coming to 'im. Karma, baby, Karma...and payback's always a biyotch.
Anyway, keep it up. I like the fact that even though being so mean is out-of-character for Jay, it seems believeable when you write it.
And if you want, I'll beta-read (be an editor type) for you if you want me to. My email is Tmm1226@aol.com. |
| Aisha C 2004-02-02 . chapter 3 Hmm...it's getting good
keep it up |
| NaughtyKittyKat 2004-01-07 . chapter 3 Oh, please continue this!! I love it! Please!
Lady Ithiliell |
| Galaxy788 2003-07-28 . chapter 3 I love it! I begging you to write more! |
| hulababy 2003-05-15 . chapter 3 more,more, more, more pllease!! I can't wait to see how Ebony kicks Jay's ** |
 Maibe Josie 2003-05-15 . chapter 3i'm a bit confused by everything... |
| lexs_gurl1 2003-05-01 . chapter 1 Hey, I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to be up! It has me intrigued as to why Jay is doing all of this. |
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