Aw! So sweet! -
Loved it! There should be more stories like this.
*sigh* But sadly there aren't u.u
Write more like this, damnit!

This is screwed up. Jim and Gene are like blood brothers and to get them together..would be like incest...yuck! In other words I didn't like it. I usually try new things out but..NO!

that was truly great! i love how it's the same story from both perspectives, and how you made it sweet without being disgustingly sappy. great job...

*sniff* sorry. this was really nice. I don't normally like slash(or whatever) but this was really good.

Hm... hm... heh. Very fun. Love it.

That was so good!

It made me feel all funny... Like when I climb the ropes in gym class..

;)

lol. But seriously...

That was very very beautiful. Sad, cute, dare I say funny? All wrapped into one.

:)

... Wow... There need to be more Gene/Jim shonen-ai/yaoi like this. That was amazing. I wish I could write like that... get into their heads... I'm really only about the action portrayal ::sighs:: Good job

Lovely, lyrical writing. A beautiful story, with just a hint of angst, but lots of love. Wonderfully written. I look forward to reading more of your work.