*sniffles* so sad! My poor Zhou Yu. Very well done. I really enjoyed it.

Such a beautiful and sad fanfic...

I love it.

Lord Ma

no no NO! zhou yu cant die! TT_TT yes...i wish wu got more attention too...i wish with all my heart that Wu had conquered china that day...and i agree ...ZHOU YU IS HOT! I love this fic...its so sad...TT_TT WAH!1

Someone find that man a bun!

In all seriousness though, this is a great fic. I love the battle scene, and Sun Ce's recklessness is great. ^^ Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

That was so sad, but so good! I actually started to cry...ah hell...I'm still crying right now...*sniff* Keep up the excellent work!! *sob*

;--; Ei-! *clings to Sun Ce* O_O I AM AWED. Also lazy. Punishment for not reading this sooner shall be reading it again. And maybe again. Just to make sure...yeah...

:D Fantastic job! I LOVE it!

Wow, thats a brilliant piece of fan fiction. Please read mine. Its called Mei Lin, Caught Between Two Lives, And Two Loves. Tell me what you think.
Sun Ce rocks
Mei Lin

Oh,God!This is so well written...so when are you going to give us some more,huh?Zhou Yu is indeed hot!Go Wu!More story!

OH! I haven't read fanfics for years, but I remember reading your LOD fics XD I love your one Rose/Lloyd fic. ^_^ I just love your fanart too XD
That's so funny, I was playing Dynasty Warriors yesterday and I really really wanted to read a Zhou Yu/Sun Ce fic. I never expected to find one by you, lol ^^
This is so awesome, I love this fic. Love it, I wish I could write like that! So dramatic *snuggles Zhou Yu* He's such a bishie >< Yes, not enough Wu in DW.
What 'til I tell my brother that someone actually agrees with me in my choice of couples.

OMG! Please don't let Zhou Yu die. That was so sad. I was on the verge of tears. Umm...really good, I like it a lot. You are a very good writer. PLEASE DON'T LET HIM DIE!

E! Have been playing DW4 obsessively since Christmas, and I agree -- Wu is underappreciated. And I always knew there was something going on with those two . . . . ^_^ You should read the book the game is based on. I'm working through it now, and it's really good, and really funny in places. I can send you a link to a website where you can download it, if you want.
--DM

*Looks at story* WAI
Chibi Zhou Yu: How many clifhanger has She manged to read with one of us dieing?
Chibi Vincent(FF7): 10 no 11 now.
Both Chibis: *sigh*
*huggles CZY* DON'T LET HIM DIE PLEASE *cries some more*

very touching! and i agree with you Zhou Yu is so fine and hot!

I got Dynasty Warriors 4 about a month ago , it's an awesome game !! I got hooked as soon as I played it . Zhou Yu's my fave character , he's so KAWAII ! ^_~ Anyway , I can't wait 'till the next chapter . Don't let Zhou Yu die , pweese...? *Sniff* *Sniff* Ja ne !! ^^''

second chapter please :)