wow... this was amazing... O_O
keep writing. it's a real treat.

you rock man.This story is very good.plese right more like this story but in a difrent stituantion and plese dont make yahiko be the bad guu and megumi and sano die.later, jana.

hey! I just spent like almost all day reading your fic! I love it so much! it's so great and well writen! Your a very good author and I hope you write more RK fics!! I give it a 20 out of 10!

Off to read the next chapter!

interesting...off to read more!

Good story... but I did find points where it was lacking - mainly the end. I'd like to see something on Yahiko&Co... maybe evena sequel in the future including some other characters (baddies mainly all that are left, but they're cool). I was rooting for Yihako&Co, myself. Though the story was on Kaoru and Kenshin... I can see where Yahiko is right. Wrong, too... but right. More right at first than I believe Kaoru and Kenshin are. Sequel? More?

i love it!!...

OMG! This story is so bloody and sad!! Why did so many ppl have to die!! *wails*

God, that was really good! But it made me sick too, no offense... to sum up the feeling, thank god RK didn't turn out that way! At first I was confused at how Misao and Kaoru could hate each other so much, but then I remembered they never met. Well, them meeting would probably not change anything, compared to how Kaoru delt with Yahiko. She almost killed him! Or maybe she did. We don't know.
It was really sickening in an emotional way to see all of the characters fighting each other like this... now I'm going to be in a sour mood for the rest of the evening. -_- Throughout the story, I found myself cheering the Yahiko, Misao, and Saitou side. 0_o I know that was probably not your intention, but that's how I felt. I'm a very revenge type person, and so I guess I was on their side because I can see how Yahiko felt throughout the whole thing.
*sigh* Yup, in a depressed mood now. Next time I watch RK I'll probably be feeling very weird. But still, it was wonderfully written and a cool plot. So I added you to my Fave. Author's list. It was just depressing to see the old close characters turn on each other.

It's a great story. Excellent, but the spelling and grammar is horrible. You should edit it, then repost it. What happened to Yahiko and Miaso? It was a great story. I loved it!

Just wanted to comment on something. (I haven't finished the story yet, but it's been great so far.) However, I got a little bit confused. The part where Kenshin is dreaming: if that's alluding to what happened in the past, didn't Kaoru say that Sano had died and left her and Kenji alone, so I thought that he had died before Kenji? Maybe I'm wrong in thinking that this is the actual past and it's actually Kenshin's rendition of it?

that wasn't right! no!! sequel sequel!! T-T

aw...thats so sad...
and yesterday i meant sweet XP im so stupid haha.. hope to see more stories soon!

aww..that's so sad...and yet..so sad...
your right, angst is your specialty, but i think you're just an awesome, talented writer ^-^ keep up with your great works!

Everything in this story is fragile, and so delicate, and was so easily broken.

We don't know what had happend to Yahiko, Saitou, or Misao. What had happened to Tsumbe, Tae, and the people of the Aoiya? It's sad to know Suzume had went through the same fate as Tomoe had for Kenshin.

It's a good story, but I'll be picky about the part of blessing the food, but it's a minor detail.

13 years...