Hey this is Eloisa sorry, to do this again but I kinda mis typed my web url on chapter one review. well here it is: http://w.geocities.com/angel_star67/welcome.htmlHeres the URL to my anti-relena page as well, well if you're interested on visiting^^; http://w.geocities.com/angel_Star67/anti_relena.html
Keep up the cool work,hope to see more of this story^_^
~Eloisa~

I'd like to join up the Lena Slayers^_^ I cant stand her. Please come and visit my GW Original Characters website if you would like to see my character's pic^^; Http://w.geocities.com/angel_star67/welcome.html
Oh yeah.. I also own an Anti-Relena Website=)
Well here it goes..
Name:Elisa Enriques, but everyone calls her Esa for short.
Age:15 a year younger than the other pilots
Gender:female
Eyes:Ocean Green
Hair:black, medium length
Clothes:black pants,a red tank top with a stripe of a darker color red in the middle.
Personlity: Very out going,optimistic,full of ideas,can be shy at times,loves anything sweet,but shes not good to be around when shes pissy.
Who do they get along with and don't:She gets along with everyone,and yes even Wufei, but she doesnt seem to get along with Relena. She hates the girl with a passion.
Anything else:She also has a crush on Heero, but acts like she doesn't and hides it from him instead.

ERR... um ok thats was weird REALLY WEIRD ok so u REALLY can BASH HER Relena SUCKS yeah more BASHING!

Yeak! The relenas breed like Rabbits! NO! Save me from the Relena(s)! I'm going to keep reading this. *grin*

This will prove to unendingly funny. I must join in klilling Relena. (or at least a representative for me) Please let me join!
from: The US
Name:Eric
Age:18
gender:Male
eyes:dark chocolate
hair: In his eyes a bit, brown, frosted blonde
cloths: White tank-top, black leather jacket, jeans.
personality: a rich, suave, snob. Loves ladies, men, wine, and expensive living.
Doesn't get along with: male authority figures, and punk guys that are shoter than him.(ht:6'3)
Does " ": every one else
mics: Smokes, very devious.

eep. How many freaking Ralena's are there? *blinks*

I hope you like this character. And go easy on me I've really the show I've only heard and read about. So here she comes:

Leah Kokashi
17 (or same age as Duo)
5'7"
75 lbs
Female
-dark emerald green eyes
-long light blonde hair, normally in a braid that comes down past her waist. some bangs fall in front of her face.
-long tight black pants that stop at her hips and a tight black blouse with sleeves that start just below her shoulders. she wears a bird/snake pendant(bird with snake coiled around it)
- Leah is very quiet and stealthy, and doesn't trust anyone because she was brought up in government custody and was trained as an unstoppable secret agent,assasin and spy. She was sent to spy on and kill Heero Yuy and others but when she accidentally gets caught by Duo Maxwell who falls for her. She pretends to play it cool for a while, but ends up falling in love with him too.
-eventually the team starts to like her and she starts to trust them and likes them too especially Duo. The only three she doesn't see eye to eye with and vice versa are Reena, Heero, and Wulfei(is that how you spell his name? sorry)
-the pendant around her neck means Leah "flys" through trees as fast as a bird and strikes without warning, steathy as a snake.
-she has no family because as I said before she was raised in government custody to be a killing machine.

Good Luck! and E-mail me at angelcatj@yahoo.com if decide to use my OC.
P.S. I have seen G-Gundam and I have a character in my bio if you want to use her, but tell first please.

this is not a flame.i'm just in a bad mood because you didn't use my charator in this chapter so i hope you use her in the next one or else. other than that i liked it. later.

i really like this chapter! i am giving you the information below on my character that i am (someday) going to write a gw story about... here it is:
Name: Kristine Renee’ Yuy
Nickname: Kit
Age: 18
Height: 5’5’’
Weight: 105
Eye/hair color: Persian blue/ chocolate brown w/ ice blue tips
Sex: female
Origin: Japanese
DOB: October 13 a.c. 180, Friday
Special features: long braid, eye’s change color to suit mood, telepathic (talk to people with mind and enter others’ minds), telekinetic (bring things to self using her mind), inhuman strength, one of the only 5-gundam wing girl pilots
Personality: mostly like her twin brother’s, Heero, but most of the time can be really optimistic, talkative, mischievous, and funny
Hobbies: meditate, yoga, Relena bashing, thinking up things to do to Relena, practicing martial arts, sword fighting, marksmanship practice at a shooting range with different types of guns, training with gundam, computer hacking, keeping body in top fighting condition, reading, listing to music, annoying others, playing guitar, inventing new items to use in missions, working on chemistry set, practice using new languages
Unknown facts: Heero is her twin brother, only three people have seen her with her hair down (Heero, Sister Diana, and Cat), four tattoos; one on left arm (water droplet with the Chinese symbol meaning ‘good luck’), one on inside right wrist (KRY), one on back of right shoulder (dragon), and one around belly button (barb wire), wears a necklace given to her by Sister Jasla before she left the Yenn Church, has a pair of black angel wings, has the ability to change into Shinigami
Gundam: The Dragon of the Mists, designed to have all of the ammunition of Heavyarms, all the strength and the zero system of Wing Zero, and all of the protection of Sandrock, transforms into a dragon and has flight mode
i hope that you can use my charater in your story, by the way she does not like Relena at all, and Wufie and her get along, just barely...that's all!! well, write more soon!
kit =^-^=

Name: Deena

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Black w/blonde streak

Clothes: Jeans w/old Tee

Personlity: Fiery. Very energetic. Short Temper

Who do they get along with and don't: They are hated by everyone!

Anything else: a lil' aggressive...

i have a chacacter you could use
name:samuri
age:14
gender:male
eyes:blue&brown(one blue one brown my eyes are that way:))
hair:brown
clothes:completly black sleevles tee shirt and pants and reverse blade sword on his back and a desert eagle for a pistol tied onto his leg and throwing stars
personality:very sadistic when it comes to fighting when the fight gets too intense he goes into zero mode(used zero system one too many times because he liked using it)hates relena heero is his favorite chacter dou quatre trowa are okay hates wufei because he is his rival(did i spell that right?) o ya i forgot to menching he is very musculer and is black belt in karate,knows every art of self defense is the best at using swords and throwing stars has never missed a single shot with his desert eagle.
:way to kill relen shoot her in the heart throw over a dozen throwing stars at her then chop her head off run her over with a truck use wing gundam zeros twin buster rifle and to finish whats ever left of her he wil eat her him self.disgusting i know but he realy realy realy hates relena so much he'd eat her just to make shure she was dead.P.S this is a great fic

omg someone flameing this fic!

but its so good
they is just stupid

i no some funny flames just go 2 w.heerosferret.com/toast and go into the relena toture game its fun u can kill relena hehe

HAHAAHHAA! this is so ** funny! plus, i totally lurve the idea of a TON of releenas, although that's really creepy *shudder* but its a great idea, cause that means releena gets killed over and over and over again! yeah, o thank you so much for putting my oc in, i lurve what you done with her, dirt fight, heehee! yeah, and you put in the whole gettin heero and duo together thing in, huza! but the question is, will you? yeah, so far, the ways of killing releena have been great, but i would also suggest torture, slow and painful, its more fun, and **-slapping! seriously though, this fic is great and its so ** hilarious! and whoever that anonymous reviewer was,o you are soo right, the ** coward deserves to die! if i ever found out who it was i would hunt them down! *evil cackle* pleeze continue as soon as you can, pleeze! ^_^

Ha! Die Relena u scum!! *sweat drop* Heya! I'm loving this story and if u want 2 u can use this character.
Name: Skye
Age: 13
Gender: NONE! um I mean female
Eyes: Amber
Hair: Dark blue w/ balck streaks, short
Clothes: black (g shes boring)
Personality: like Duo's
Who do they get along with and don't: Gets along w/ everyone except Relena and Hilde
Anything else: Wants 1x2 to get together

Interesting story. I need to read more really before I can say if I like it or not but it sounds like the makings of a good story.

As for anonymous reviewer- that person needs to get a life. Sheesh. I mean if they spend their free time cussing out people for no reason then they really must lead a dull life.