Good story! I like it a lot. It is diffidently a new spin on the founders. You are a very good writer. Though I was very sad when Godric died. I really liked him! Good job! Please keep going!

Good story. I didn't want Godric to die, though...

Wow. I am completely confused, but I have faith that you will follow canon...

I am intrigued, and I like this very much!

Finally! =D I've been keeping an eye out for an update from you. I adore you Rowena very much. n.n Please continue.

you bastard flo! you utter bastard! how could you kill him off? why would you do this to me? as if its not bad enough that mercators stopped writting,now you go and kill him off, well thank you very much!...(i shall have to have a serious talk with you later..)

Wow! We finally get to meet Rowena!

@_@ She's amazing

hey flo, lauren here..
im likeing it: telling the story from the point of view of godrics sister creates an interesting point of view although youve got me woried about what happens to her...you have a strong use of vocabulary as well which really helps to bring out the tragedy of the opening chapter...keep up the good work!

Awsome! Very cool, can't wait to meet Rowena! Please continue!

Well, you have to write more. I need to know what happens. And you haven't even got to where the whole 'Gryffindor' thing came from.

So far I'm liking it. It's good, interesting, imaginative, well-researched. Makes sense, too. kudos. I'll go and read the other chapters now.

good cahtper, keep up the good work, bues

Another quality chapter - keep up the good work!

This is/was very interesting. Continue if there's more!
~Nayeli

I like the plot. Has to be one of the best Founders stories I've ever read, no holds barred. Write more!

JUst wondering what Bible passage this was inspired by? Or have you already said? In any case, which?
*be's quiet*
Why?
Who knows?