   Hocapontas 2008-11-23 . chapter 21I loved the part about Yugi's deck being so loyal and how thay protected him. That was cool! |
| Hocapontas 2008-11-23 . chapter 19 Is there a story that comes before this one? A story that explains what happened to Yami that caused him to turn traitor the first time. And I would like to know how Ben knows so much about Yami and Yugi. Is there a story that explains everything that happened before this story? I was confused when Ben explained things to Mike as to how he knew all that. Please tell me if there is another story. |
 Laryna6 2004-07-12 . chapter 1Wow! You have long stories! I wish I could write that much! I have to get off the computer now, but I promise to read your stuff eventually. Thanks for all those reviews! And explaining what you liked! I love you! |
 dodgethis9271 2003-12-31 . chapter 2Very well written. I love the amount of detail. I guess I will be reading this for a while, but I will enjoy it I know that much. Keep it up pal. |
| Mitsu-teshi 2003-10-07 . chapter 11 O! Kaiba makes me mad! The rabbit should have a name even if it is only...well...a rabbit! Why did Tea and the others need that necklace thing? I'm sure that will come latter. It must have been important. |
| Mitsu-teshi 2003-10-07 . chapter 10 Yay! Everybody won! Especially Yugi! Go Yugi! Now what? |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 9 Cool! (As I have said before) Listen, this is really a great story and you are a very good writer with the discription and everything! I've got to go for tonight. It's a school night and I have to get ready for bed. I'll review more later. You definitely deserve more reviews for your work! This is totally awesome! Lata! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 8 Cool! Someone was kidnapped in the attept to get to Yugi! Awesome! Need to read more! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 7 Yay! An adventure! WHOOHOO! Yipee! Here we go! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 6 HAHAHAHA! EEvee! That was great! I like the way you portray Joey and the others. Great job! Inspirational! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 5 Oh, poor YUGI! He's my favorite character by the way! What is going to happen to him? |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 4 Oh, poor Ben! Good of Matt to fix him up like that. This is a really interesting story! Just like I thought. Yup! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 3 Cool! That Madak dude seems to be very...jumpy. That's not exactly the word I'm looking for but I guess it will do. He definately jumps to conclusions too quickly. Nice job with your characters! You are an excellent writer! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 2 Amazing! You are so good at description! It's only been two chapters and I already like this story! That was a BIG opening paragraph! But that's ok! |
| Mitsuko-chan 2003-09-29 . chapter 1 Cool! This story sounds really interesting so far! I so can't wait to read more! Great job! |
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