hey, i like your story, i'm also a Mercedes Lackey fan. there's supposed to be a new book coming out called Joust, and it sounds interesting, you ought to read it. Keep writin'!

OMIGAHD! **!

Sorry for the sudden outburst. Today is my sick day(yay! don't have to go to school. Down side...being sick) I decided to read a Quatre/Dorothy fic and yours popped up. I...Love this fic!!!! Please write an epilogue!

EEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!

Wonderful, wonderful story!!! I love the way you write your Dorothy! So much better than I do! Heh, heh, and don't worry about G-pilot torture; if I had the guts I would torture them too...Anyways, I loved this story!!! Do a sequel! *gets big chibi eyes* Pweeaase?

*eyes chap* Very abrupt ending. Then again, you seem to do those a lot, huh? I wanna know why it took ten years fer her t'walk. Lack of tech? Surely physical therapy wouldn't take THAT long...would it? I said earlier that Doro wasn't OOC but in this chap...extremely so, even taking the circumstances into consideration. Still dunno if I agree with a QuatxDoro relationship but it's at least bearable. You did it good. *nods* You did Doro REALLY good.

*shakes her head* Cliched. You know, I saw that happening (Luir pulling the gun on Doro when Quat arrived) a chap or so ago? Ah well, necessary, I suppose. *S* The angst that will be caused by Doro's pain will be sweet!

*sighs* Odd as it may seem, Doro an' Quat do seem to fit together. *rolls eyes* Maybe. *S* Good chap. But wouldn't they notice that no one else carries a sabre? Or has insanely long hair? Or is it still in its bun?

Kinda sudden, eh? *shakes her head and smiles* 'Bout damn time. *laughs and grins* Now th' fun begins!

*blinks* Damn. How in the Sith blazes did he manage to cook? *shakes her head* Figures, with him. *smiles as she eyes the fic* It's got to me the Hopeless Romantic in me that's squeeling at the thought of Quat an' Doro FINALLY together. Gotta be. It was done well, reguardless.

*L* Don't know many writers who ASK for flames. Oi...*nods* Nice chap, though. Needed, too. Gotta get Heero up there SOMEHOW, right? *laughs and shakes her head* And as much as I was against the pairing to begin with, I think I might be coming around. At least as a Doro fan, if nothing else. Still iffy on th' whole DC/QW thing, though.

*smiles and nods* Good intermission chap. I assume they know as much as Doro did when she went up there. *L* Man, it's gonna be fun watchin' Duo tear loose up on Luir's crew.

*blinks* Damn. *BS* SWEET! *laughs and grins* Loved how she had Luir practically eatting out of her hand.

*squeels and smiles brightly* YAY! Doro's so beautiful when she's in a protective, fiery rage! *sighs and smiles* Ah...so sweet. *L* Gods, I'm messed up. Good chap. VERY good chap. *nods and smiles*

*blinks* You think Doro's OOC? *shakes her head* Not the way I see it. She's adapting to a new situation, is all. You do her very well. An' this part wasn't all THAT dark, I don't think. Then again, I've become jaded to such things so it probably was. *shrugs* What I'm wondering is how she's gonna handle all her hair while working. She's gonna hafta pin it back or something.

*blinks* Damn. That totally sucks. Lovely scene, though. *nods and smiles* Can't wait to see how she gets out of this mess she's found herself in.

*blinks* Okay, who's that? For some reason, the voice is coming out as Quinze's in my head. S'good chap. *L* I think I'm starting to like Doro.