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Wouldn't you like to know XD
2005-10-10 . chapter 3
HOW DARE U STOP THERE! *glare* I'm not going to forgive this inselince you HAVE to update! ...*suddenly breaking down* PLEASE! *puppydog eyes* I LUV this! heh...I'm just waiting for him to slip her up...*evil smirk* don't get me wrong it's sweet how you think 'bout the bodygaurds and all and your OOC's are cool and stuff, but noone apsolutly NOONE could possibly compair to Sun Shang Xiang. She's my apsolut FAV in (so far) all the DW's! heh...anywho I luv the fic and once again wish for you to update...please and thanx...BTW If it was the real Shang Xiang and she was healthy she'd be kicking their A**'s *evil laugh* that's just how much she rox! ^_^V o pliz have her kick some A** soon!

~/\~\/~XD
StAmPeDeR18
2005-02-22 . chapter 3
Please update this one soon. Good story and unique idea, especially the Zhang he/ SSX pairing. And how's SSX supposed to keep the secret when she doesn't even know there is one? I wanna see how that goes... Himiko'll be freaking out...
RyukiData
2004-10-03 . chapter 3
Ahaha!! This was amusing... Definitely, go for the SSX/Zhang He, you never see any of those... Zhang He's such a clever little bastard...makes me want to slap him. :P
Ming
2004-01-25 . chapter 3
Oh no, what is going to happen to poor SSX? I hope she'll be alright and I hope you will update soon! Pwease! ^_^
Girl-who-sings-the-blues
2004-01-16 . chapter 3
wow, I don't mean to offend you or Zhang He but he actually sounds attractive! hee hee hee
What will happen to SSX? And Sima Yi will heal her, Gosh! SSX will blow the cover! What will Himko do!?
So will Cao Cao make a appearance with "ssx"?
I wanna know!
bluephoenix
2004-01-06 . chapter 3
Nice story! Please UPDATE! If not, you'll pay! NOT!HA,ha! Wait that wasn't funny. Darn.
AmaDono
2003-12-22 . chapter 3
Heh... sorry, but Femme Fatal isn't mine, I'm just posting it for a friend. (It's a lot more... sane... than my other peices of work. Besides, if I wrote it, I'd make the men rolling around on the floor, screaming about those damned cramps.) Superbowl... I tend to question if I was on the use of drugs when I wrote it. Dynasty Funhouse was originally used to vent my extremely insane and random thoughts, and it scares me what it's become now.
Anyways, SSX is sick? How could you? You've screwed Wu (even though I'm not a big Wu fan)! Well, it is flu season... *hands SSX some Advil* Poor, gullible Zhang He, seems like beauty comes before common sense. *pats the butterfly man on the head* Anyway, nice to see this was updated faster than the last chapter. Still very good, I seriosuly can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on fighting in the land of daycare children! You can do it! (Just remember, the squirrels are your friends.)
kazumi-chan
2003-12-21 . chapter 3
hey damn girl...
is this a ssx/zhange he ficiee oh i want one of those...hehe anywayz... i wonder wats gonna happen
kazumi-chan
2003-12-21 . chapter 3
hey damn girl...
is this a ssx/zhange he ficiee oh i want one of those...hehe anywayz... i wonder wats gonna happen
me you and kaoru
2003-12-20 . chapter 3
Oh...such a cool chapter! If only I could write like you...
They said that I'd develop a distinctive style soon, but I dunno...
Anyways, pertaining to the fic:
More rising conflict! Hehe...Himiko is pretty smart. Zhang He is...kind of gullible. Works well in such a situation.
I'm worried though...
NO! What will Zhang He AND Sima Yi do to Sun Shang Xiang!?
Probably nothing VILE...yup. SSX has a fever and wounds.
Still though, I'm waiting for another chapter... *singsong voice*
Write more!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues
2003-11-08 . chapter 2
hey hey hey hey!
I love your fic! I personally,
like SSX! I think she's a uniqe character,
and so many people overlok that!
Well, update soon!




` Till I sing again,

Girl-who-sings-the-blues
Xiakoda
2003-11-05 . chapter 2
Ah! Very interesting story.

This is the first I've seen of this kind. Muse02 likes. yes indeedy.

Anyway, can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
me you and kaoru
2003-11-02 . chapter 2
Yay! Another chapter!

I just love that little exchange at the end of this chappy with Zhen Ji and Mei.

Now what will happen to dear little Himiko? Will Cao Cao be able to tell Himiko and Lady Sun apart? The suspense!

Keep writing!
SharonToggle
2003-11-02 . chapter 2
o, I like this idea! (from the bodyguard's point of view, I mean) Very original! I love the Kessen girls, I always use them when I'm playing Sun Ce, so he can be a pimp ^^; lol! My favorite line in the whole story so far! "You've been spending time with Xiao Qiao's bodyguards again - haven't you?" XD
I really like this story so far! I've become a Shang Xiang fan overnight, ever since I played nine hours yesterday as her @.@ I really like this fanfic, if I haven't made that clear, already ^^;; Please keep posting!
AmaDono
2003-11-01 . chapter 2
I was just about to give up hope for this fic, then BOOM! You come up from nowhere and update!

This fic rocks. You're a very talented writer. I wish I could be half as good as you are.

Also, I'm glad you like the Zhang He/SSX idea, but I think the only reason I said it was because I was happy someone else liked it enough to write it (I can hardly remember, especially with my short memory span).
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