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| Betty81 2004-11-20 ch 7, | abuseHum .. I'm truly fond of this kind of stories, of some D/J dreamin'. That's the main reason why I started reading your fanfic. But to be honest, you are in need of working on your writing-style. Typos but also logical mistakes as well as some bad described scenes (I've never read such a bad wedding-part before) take out a lot of the possible feeling. The story was nice however. |
| KTC 2003-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse2 words. Great story! |
| xxbreathe0ut88xx 2003-06-02 ch 7, | abuseOk I just loved this because you have Joey and Dawson together and because it was really good! |
| BabbleBaby 2003-05-12 ch 7, | abuseHey Megan!! Such a cute ending! I knew Joey was pregnant when she said she was getting fat just knew it! and thanks for the PA bits! Y'know I love it! Have a great trip hon! xDawnx |
| JustOneBreath15 2003-04-24 ch 4, | abuseHey I really like your story. The only problem is you should maybe read over the chapter before posting it because somethings don't really make sense that you say like "What she didn't know was that Pacey loved twice as much as she loved her." stuff like that. Well update soon...can't wait to see what happens next! ~Britt~ |
| Angel Eyes9 2003-04-20 ch 3, | abuseI just read chapter 3 and I loved it especially the Dawson & Joey parts they are the best I can hardly wait to read your next chapter so e-mail me and let me know okay bye |
| JustOneBreath15 2003-04-20 ch 3, | abuseaw I love this story. I'm more of a Pacey/Joey fan but Joey does NOT deserve Pacey anymore after what she did to him! Well anyways back to your story I like it a lot. I can't wait to find out what happens next so please update soon! :) |
| GeorgieQ 2003-04-20 ch 2, | abusegreat story! I really hope you put Pacey and Andie together! They are absoutely perfect for each other! I miss them so much! |
| JustOneBreath15 2003-04-15 ch 2, | abuseLove the story. But Andie & Pacey can't get together they just aren't right for eachother anymore. And I hope Dawsone & Joey get together and stay together for once. |
| Angel Eyes9 2003-04-14 ch 2, | abuseReally good job on Chapter 2 I can hardly wait until the next chapter is posted so keep up the good work and e-mail me when you post the next chapter okay my e-mail is Blueeyes_wwf@hotmail.com |
| Angel Eyes9 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved the story and Can hardly wait to read the next chapter and I'am so glad that this is a Dawson & joey story because they are my favorite character on the show and I love to read storys about them though I'am so sad that this is the last year for Dawson's Creek when the last episode air I wil be crying my heart out like a bay e-mail me at Blueeyes_wwf@hotmail.com to let me know when you have posted the next chapter okay thanks and keep up the good work it is a very good and interesting story I can hardly wait to read the next chapter so please hurry it up already. |
| JustOneBreath15 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAh I hate cliff hangers! lol Update soon I like it so far! I hope it's Dawson @ the door! Or Pacey. I wouldn't care they are both awsome and HOTT! he he |
| Maya3 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abusei really like this . I also really hope that it's dawson at the door |