This sounds like it will be very interesting. I hope that it is not dead

cool story, but are we going to see more of it any time soon?

its an interesting fic. hope its not dead.

This is by far one of the better Eva stories I have come across. I have always been of the opinion that Shinji was a whiny spineless loser. This was especially bad when I rewatched the series when I was taking a psyc course. If I had the need I could have written all kinds of papers for that class dealing with waste-of-life-Shinji. It is good to read a story where a proper hero (or in Shinji's case, just about any random person off the street would have been better) gets put into his position and takes charge.

I hope you come back to this story and write more. Good job on what has been written, and good luck on what you have yet to write.

Hiya, it's me again.
Sorry, I did not review every chapter, mainly because I spent this day to read all your 27 chapters. Wow! I think, if they were 54, I will keep reading even during this night!
So, you let Asuka-lein (German for -chan) appear, but will Kazuki do it always right for her?

Let the mistake happen and make it right, that will maybe the way to impress such a person like Asuka, instead foresee every situation. I'm really interested in, how he'd handle such situations. Again, sorry for poor English.

Hey, LordNightKnight was right, your FF is awesome!
But I just want to mention, that Hikari's surname Horaki and not Hotari is.
But it's only a small detail. Sorry for poor english, it's not my native language.

My one question is why in the heck are you not updating this? This is a good story and I feel that you should focus on this for a while.

Great! Liked what you have done as it makes it rather interesting... the later parts would be most interesting I'm sure.
Do hope that u would continue as i cant get enough

As a fellow author with delayed-update-syndrome, DUS for short, I am really, really digging this scoop! I hope that you will continue this and so far, despite a lack of editing, it's not plagued with errors. If you would like someone to pre-read for you, and i know that Janice is wonderful, I'd be happy to take a stab at it. Anyway, I am really looking forward to more of the story, and Keep up the good work!

Ever think about how things would have gone if Heero Yuy from Gundam Wing had piloted an eva? Anyway, I got to see Raxaphon, then Dual, but I've not seen much Evangelion. Wierd since I read so many of the Fan Fics. keep it up!

Keep Writing!

Nice to see your still writing, however, this chapter seemed to be missing something, I don't know exactly what, but it did.
But it was well writen, perhaps it was your lack of action. Normally you had something in the chapter that forced me to speed read to see what would happen next.

why do i always get the feeling that those who accuse others of being perverts are the perverts themselves?

excellent work

Rumors...The bane to every couples life.
Well any way...Kazuki may not have a decent shot of getting back via a random event that futzes up the simulations but it might do wonders for Shinji for a little bit to find how to get a back bone surgically in place.

Ouch. Do you have to write Toji's speech like that? It's like trying to read someone speaking in a Bronx accent or something. His speech wasn't that bad in the dub.

Asuka sure has an overactive imagination.