 Seiberwing 2005-01-04 . chapter 1*SHudder* Creepy...You did see the episode after Sacrifice, right? What will Hoist do? |
 123deadaccount456 2004-07-01 . chapter 1YES! HOT SHOT'S DEAD!
... I mean...
aw... its so sad...
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very good. i hate autobots so this was just the thing to up my mood, (no offense). It was writen very well and i would love to see more from you! |
 ceestar 2004-02-20 . chapter 1 Hey, me again, but see when I last reviewed? Well, later that night, when I went to sleep, I had a dream, I was watching TF:A, and I saw Hotshot, in a room, I say him through a glass window, a little ditance of. I knew it'd be scary, so I shut my eyes, or tried, but couldn't, he had a gun to his head and POW! He slowly fell to the ground and I was screaming! It was like, your fic, I DREAMT of that part of your fic! How cool is that?! Please make a sequel soon, and email me! |
 Ceestar 2004-01-25 . chapter 1NONONONONONONO! HOTSHOT! NONONONONONONO!
IT HURTED FAR TOO MUCH WITH STARSCREAM!! NOT HOTSHOT TOO!! NONONONONONONO! SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!! *runs away, in millions of tears*
P.S. That part where you wrote where everyone was and stuff, it was SO COOL! AWESOME IS SAY! |
 Jetfighter Prime 2004-01-08 . chapter 1it is a good story but you have seen the episode where starscream joins them for a while there smokescreen come back not as his old me but as a new
keep up the good work |
 Skins Thunderbomb 2003-12-28 . chapter 1 Very sad, and very well written. i liked this story a lot.
Keep up the good work!
ST |
 Animeboyzroc 2003-12-19 . chapter 1*bawling her eyes out* That is exactly what my thought was when I saw Sacrifice! Smokescreen just couldn't be gone! You really should make a sequel, you got somethin' goin' with this fic. I look forward to it! |
 Navis 2003-12-15 . chapter 1This was an excellent story. The personal messages to everyone were a very nice touch. |
 Deja Wu 2003-11-26 . chapter 1;_; Wah! Poor Hotshot... he's my second favorite character... |
 Simply Crisis 2003-10-06 . chapter 1*SNIFF* i loved it it was soo sad
but i still loved it poor hotshot
a least smoke screen came back
though hey?!Any way see ya! |
 Ashana 2003-04-17 . chapter 1You have to write a *sob* sequal to this. Please! *sob* Gosh, why did they have to go and kill Smokescreen? *Sob* |
 Brooke 2003-04-14 . chapter 1 Man this made me cry as much as that ep. You got to write a sequel. |
 Green Devil 2003-04-14 . chapter 1So sad,so beautiful!I really loved this fic.I think it was exactly what HotShot felt.Poor Smokescreen,I cried my eyes out too when I saw that ep.It's no fair!Autobots aren't suppost to die!But yeah,he did die with honer.I guess I'll just have to wait till the next ep. to see wnat happens.Well,great fic!You should really make a sequel!^_^! |
 /// 2003-04-14 . chapter 1 Found thise by aceddent good but sad story, keep up the good work |