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| New lord of darkness 2006-07-17 ch 13, | abuseIm Impressed. Very nice. Keep going. |
| ShadowligerV 2006-03-01 ch 13, | abuseI love this stroy and hope you finish it soon but the whole thing with bit being dumbfounded by a living zoid granted it has toris blood in it but come on the liger zero is a living zoid and so isnt the berserk fury. well thats all i hope you finish the story cause other than the complaint here4 i love the story. oh and one more thing i hope u put more bit/leena in cause that is the only thing that will make bit saving her right and i think that you should have bit and tori beat that zoid with a new liger armor. |
| nekkibasara81 2005-11-12 ch 13, | abusei would like to know that this story is finished or not? i think isn't finished yet right? |
| Midnite Angel 2005-05-20 ch 13, | abuseYay!! I luv Bit/Leena!! What will happen next?? Update soon plz! |
| MimiPenguin 2005-01-15 ch 13, | abuseHe's fallen at last. There will be much fluff in the future...at least, I hope there will be (for your sake). heh heh |
| Jerry Unipeg 2004-12-26 ch 13, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER!! |
| This Guy 2004-12-04 ch 12, anon. | abusehey... update man.. this is a great story!... and put some more bit and leena romance into it will ya?.. well put a bit of romance lolz...cyaz layta |
| Orangeandbluegator3 2004-11-27 ch 12, | abuseAnother great chapter! Always leaves me wanting more! Update soon! |
| Anwa 2004-05-22 ch 1, | abusedammit did I say seven?? I meant 9!! ::bows repeativly:: (sorry, my brain is dying and I was thinking about Cloud agian...heh..heh...but I did mean nine!) (sorry this has taken me so long to notice! ::sweatdrop:: I really am smart! I promise!) |
| MimiPenguin 2004-04-26 ch 11, | abuseI did not see any of that coming! |
| Anwa 2004-04-23 ch 11, | abuseFirst I would like to start off saying, you are defitnally one of my fave zoid writers out there and I love your fics to death. Second, this is a really well written fic, I am really enjoying it. It does have a lot of originality in it, but at the same time I am reminded a little of FF7. Don't get me wrong, it's different but it sort of the same. Kinda get what I'm saying? (Yes, I do know that I just conradicted myself) Anyways, please update soon! Love, Arwen |
| SulliMike23 2004-04-22 ch 11, | abuseYou seem to know a lot of Japanese. But another dramatic chapter as usual. |
| cap'nyossarian 2004-03-26 ch 10, | abusei just came back to this story after reading loads of inuyasha fics... and this still compares favorably to them. please keep writing this, it's good! |
| Maelgwyn 2004-03-23 ch 10, anon. | abuseRead Reviewed Good - but I think that there are parts which *could* be improved. How... dont ask me *wehistles* Maelgwyn |
| Maelgwyn 2004-03-23 ch 9, anon. | abuseKwee ^_^ I finally actually got around to reading this ^_^ And, in noirmal tradition, I have to admit - its good. Quite good. However I dont know if you shopuld have given me more swear words... I mean... now I shall go happily forth and scream out my new vocab ^_^ Mael |