Great Story!!

I was just wondering if you have dropped this story. I just stumbled on it and I really like the dark side of this story.

I have to say, the fact that this story appears to be left unfinished is very depressing :(

I wish you would have said in your summery that there was character death. I wasn't in the mood for something this sad, so I will have to finish reading it later. Chapter one was well written and I want to hit Xander with something right now the stupid git. Also I want to stake Angelus' cold dead heart.

And I thought I liked you story about Logan and Buffy, but this story rocks so far past that one it is particuly in outer space. Please continue this soon; I love how you made Buffy such a special vampire. I love how Buffy and Spike seem naturally drawn together and how Buffy is maintaining a minimum of care for her human friends. I love how you have drawn Buffy and Drucilla together as sisters. This is just an incredible story and I really hope you continue it soon! Good Luck with the job interviews!

Ok, I've recovered for the last chapter. What else do you have?

Damn this is getting serious! I'm reall luvin' this fic. The intricacies of the vampire families are truly interesting. I can't wait to see what's next!!

I'm not 100% sure that yu'll find this flattering, but I had to get my thoughts out there. This chapter shook me to my core. It was dark and sadistic and twisted. This disturbed me more than anything I think I've ever read. It was truly gruesome. That being said, none of that was meant as an insult. I can't say I loved the chapter or that it gave me fluffy bunny feeings, but that wasn't what it was meant to do. I the Xander/Buffy rape-domination-punnishment scene, your imagry was stark without being exploitive.

You've managed to capture a realistic slice of what life must be like in a nest of vampires. Authors can write as much as they want about Spike and Dru being all lovey-dovey and giving each other gifts, but the show has hinted enough times how much pain and violence is involved in their (un)lives.

I like the Spuffy twist you've given to the story and I can't wait to find out how Angel's going to take it.

Don't be surprised if you get a lot of flames or find you have a lack of reviews. A lot of people won't agree with where you've taken this story. It's honest, and like all honest things- it's painful.

I Love your story.
Please right more, and more Skike please.
;)

This I would like to see continued. Scary, but entrancing. Buffy in the sun. Well well well.

I liked this chapter. Especially the cruelty that Buffy showed. Wait, that didn't sound right.

One thing I didn't like: Why was Buffy able to walk in the sun after she left the Bronze? There's no way she should have been able to do that. Remember, suspension of disbelief is a fragile thing. Abuse it and it breaks. And if it breaks, you've lost the reader forever.

Ya know what? I think I kinda love you. In the, "oh, god, if I don't read another chapter of her story soon I'm gonna die" kinda way. Nuff said? Nuff said.

I have a couple of things to moan about when it comes to this story.
The idea that Buffy if turned in season 2 could control all three vampires and take over is ludicrous and irritating. It's like she has earned nothing, it has all just been handed to her on a silver platter, and i find her smugness angering.
And her sneaking behind all of their backs organising for them all to be ensouled without their permission? not on at all.
I feel as if i've been cheated, i expected a juicy unrepentant evil Buffy fic, instead im gonna be reading about a gaggle of souled vampires acting all goody goody.

This is a great story - I second the comment on the reviews! Keep it going! I like this spin on things.

Oh, I'm impressed. I love that your story has such an air of sinister lusty type stuff, as well as a really good plot. Not a lot of authors can do that. Now go, write more! Lots of love,
Andi