I have loved what I have read so far. The Charecter's needed some more diologue,and this exchange was good, and important to flesh out the charecter. having her only talk to Triad kept the diologue somewhat predictable, but this was a nice change of pace. I see you are working with the complexities of the main character. Dee-Lemma seems to have alot under the surface, you should find a way to outline that complexity -to make her character more concrete for the readers.